I Silently Weep

I Silently Weep

A Poem by WriterMe
"

Written for all those people that haven't found what they look for in a friend

"

 

I silently weep for my true friend to appear

To know me,

Understand me,

To love me without fear


I silently weep for my best friend to come

To hold me,

Console me,

And help me with that I've become


I silently weep every night for it to come true

Just a wish,

For some one,

I could say 'I love you too'

 

© 2009 WriterMe


Author's Note

WriterMe
Nothing very intense. Just the results of 'one of those days'. Makes me want to sigh.

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It does make you want to sigh! It made me wish for an old flame that disappeared out of my life 19 years ago - but I was young and foolish then -- oooohhhh - if i could relive those precious moments...your poem inspired me to think back to those days of foolish loves and romances that help shape us into who we are today! I loved your poem...

Posted 15 Years Ago


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A beautiful and touching poem:-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can feel the pain.. words used are perfect and simple...

nice one ^^

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple, short but packed with emotions...but its so true... we all wish for someone who truly understands and accepts us for what we are...nice poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was wonderfully beautiful. And I love it because I, too, sometimes have "one of those days." Even though it's short, you've managed to capture the feeling of it so well and I love the title as well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww. So sad, but very short and sweet. Great write.:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


So cute... so true... so simple, so humble.. love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very cute and sad... I love the rhyming!

To be honest this poem describes pretty well how I have been feeling for the past few days... 100% :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Are you kidding? Nothing intense? You've expressed so much in just three stanzas that have great rhyme schemes, by the way. It's straightforward and flows beautifully. Personally, I can relate to this poem. My friends just aren't that reliable. *sighs* You wish to find that someone who can offer you a shoulder to cry on and then not judge you for what you've just done later on.

Simply a magnificent piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


great poem..sad and really beautiful
love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Brilliantly and beautiful! The way you can show so real feelings in the short text is amazing! I love it a lot!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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