How can she be happy...

Just something I thought about...

She tries to stay strong.

but how can she when nothing is right.

everyone insults her...

she thinks the words are true.

she wishes for happiness.

but how can she  get happiness when everything is still in her dreams?..

how can she be happy when Reality s still the worst place to be in?.

Reviews

[Rod Dangers]

Quite deep and powerful.
Wasnt sure on the use of punctuation.
But the actual poem was well penned and the idea from which it stemmed is sad and resigned, well told.
Thanks for sharing

[Lizette Gomez]

Well when i read this out loud it sounds very different... thats why i use my punctuation that way. But thank you :)