Him.

First part of my story.

Today is a new day. I've been thinking. A lot actually. He's been on my
mind a lot lately. We oovoo, text, and kik. He has planted a smile on
face more than once. Every hour of everyday.... This sounds dumb  I know
but I can't help but say. Writing is my life and the only way to
express my feelings. So here's my feelings: there so strong. One minute
I'm smiling like a fool. There's this time where he rolls his eyes but
there so cute. He's eyes are like crystal on a mid winter day.
Glistening in the sun. Like diamonds floating on a deep dark blue lake.
He makes me feel so alive. So motivated. There's a lot of boys after me
but I want the one who has a girlfriend. Is that wrong? I think it's
completely wrong but I can't help it. He means a lot to me. I hope he
knows that. Will he ever tell me how he feels??

Author's Note

Rates and Reviews please?

Reviews

[Emma Anderson]

What is oovoo? "He has planted a smile on face" should be he has planted a smile on my face more than once. Also "there so strong" could be, so here's my feelings, they are so strong.

Apart from some grammar issues and miss use of the word "there" it's good and quite interesting, with editing you can turn this into something better. If you type it in Microsoft word or a similar program first it should help you with the grammar.

I hope I have been of some help to you.