On A Nighward Innovation

You mighty night,let throw my visions away,

From a mocking storm,and scornful tide's roars,
You seducer moon,your crystal eyes astray
Don't Forecast my failing,you vainly shores.
Ah! night is Bleak,yet sailing my innovation,
This life's, to swell my spirited decoration.
And booking a  jubilant, keen 'passion'
Then sways,my muse and own supervision.
My aches are binding, love me adventure!
Thrill me Night,and glean my numb-less sight
To write in golden truth, and strike in venture.
O Night! you cheering back,insane your spirit!
your's soundless nimbus; bearing mine wonder
And keeps until, the next day starts trace me....

Reviews

[Shweta Singh]

this is so very 'YOU' Nithin...I really liked this one.

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

nice choice of words...good one..keep it up :)

[Rachel Anderson]

"love me adventure!"
Love that line. There's a story in that alone!

[NITHIN PURPLE]

thanks.......

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

O Night! you cheering back,insane your spirit!.........beautiful verse!

[NITHIN PURPLE]

Thanks

[Nicole Sternshein]

Its very seductive, and alluring. Makes me want to go skinny dipping. This poem makes the night sexy. Very well written.

[NITHIN PURPLE]

ooo thanzz

[Katie Mak]

Oh, I like the meaning I myself get from this, it is wonderful, I honestly am falling in love with your writing :)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

thaxx friend,,,,,,,,

[SeaBreezes]

So powerful, amazing!

[NITHIN PURPLE]

Thank you.......

[marie]

the wording in this is brilliant, you have me envious friend, great write:)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

Thanks friend.......

[marie]

no problem:)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

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[marie]

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[NITHIN PURPLE]

nop...

[marie]

ok?????

[NITHIN PURPLE]

ya ya

[Saumya]

thats wonderful...........

[NITHIN PURPLE]

thanks friend..........

[being me]

brilliant use of words...and the images are alluring enticing...i guess i need to learn what u're tryin to teach me from here:)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

Thanks for your feedback..ya sure i do:)