Cherished Smile

Cherished Smile

A Poem by WriterInside07
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neo-folk ballad-for a friend in need

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Cherished Smile
by Patricia Francis - Copyright © Patricia Francis

 

How can I help you
How can I pull you through
I see the pain in your eyes

Tell me your troubles
ease your weary heart
don't let your burdens
tear you apart

Guilt is not the answer
no, it's no way to live
Fear is the lock
and love the key I give

Life is just a journey
a simple passage through time
You are my brother
I'm glad your path crossed mine

Our lives are short here
before you look our day is done
What will you leave behind
of your season in the sun?

So many leave
a legacy of pain
overflowing tears,
heartbreak, guilt and shame

You deserve much better
so leave your troubles at my door
I'll help you find the light
'cause that's what friends are for

Just be at peace
and sit with me awhile
'cause I've been waiting
for your cherished smile

Yes I've been waiting
for your cherished smile

© 2011 WriterInside07


Author's Note

WriterInside07
Art Photographer-Shanna-Marie Photo: From Shanna-Marie's extensive astounding portfolio- Art Photography

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What a beautiful ode to your brother.
he is lucky you care so deeply for him
I epecially loved this part
"Life is just a journey
a simple passage through time
You are my brother
I'm glad your path crossed mine"
Nice work
thank you for entering my contest


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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What a beautiful ode to your brother.
he is lucky you care so deeply for him
I epecially loved this part
"Life is just a journey
a simple passage through time
You are my brother
I'm glad your path crossed mine"
Nice work
thank you for entering my contest


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"You deserve much better
so leave your troubles at my door
I'll help you find the light
'cause that's what friends are for"

Love these lines. Loved the whole thing but those lines sung to me.
Love All, Mejasha. Thanks for excepting my friend request.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 5, 2008
Last Updated on March 16, 2011