Don't Go

Love.

It's just something.

Painful as a bee sting.

See the way it swells me?

It breaks me,

Hurts me,

Blinds me,

Kills me.

Yet I beg and plea,

Please don't leave me.

Don't go,

Don't go.

With this pain I glow,

I shall not woe

I feel my heart sink low.

I embrace pain if it means you don't leave.

I survive in thought that you will believe,

I could survive all that I grieve. 

Don't go,

I couldn't survive the stones you'd throw.

Author's Note

Yes, I rewrote it, because I have learned to write better.

Reviews

[PokemonFan#1]

Those poor couple! They loved eachother, but then she had to move!

I loved it!

KEEP IT UP!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem started off good and you led me to the sad ending. It does feel like a song. A very good poem.
Coyote

[CHRIS ANDES]

it was like a lyrics of a song...

[Roe]

wow really lovely

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

aaww...

you can always find another one though

[Dove]

This poem isnt horrible. Actually its quite good. You captured a certain moment and you were able to write a beautiful poem about it.

[ApocalypticChick]

Very sweet! It's good!

[_]

wow love at first sight sounds beautiful.......never fell in love myself

[musicfollowsme213000]

its not horrible its the bomb!!!!

[MetBySunlight]

You've caught a sad moment to certain relationships. My boyfriend moved, though we did not live next door nor was he my first kiss. I still know what it is like to have someone you love move away.
This poem isn't horrible, it's quite good actually!