Kiss the Moon
A Poem by
A summer night in June. Blow a kiss to the moon. Reflected rays, Silvery glaze.
Capture my love, Send it above. Cast away the loss and pain. Unlock the ghostly bound chain.
Listen to the nightly tune When you blow your last kiss to the moon.
© 2014
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Why when I read something yours, at the end, I smile?
Maybe because your writings rememember me some poems I've made?
This one specially remembers me a song I made, that talked about the moon and a girlfriend I had, she was as beautiful as the moon.
To blow a kiss to the moon...
Why would I ever kiss the moon? maybe because the moon is more grateful that girl...
Anyway, again, lovely poem!!
Fernando
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I vary rarely write poems that don't have something to do with being depressed or whatever, so these.. read moreI vary rarely write poems that don't have something to do with being depressed or whatever, so these cute little poems are rare. Thank you for the review:3
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10 Years Ago
Oh really??? Then that means I have a good eye for this kind of poems :D
Just beware, depressi.. read moreOh really??? Then that means I have a good eye for this kind of poems :D
Just beware, depression is a powerfull source of inspiration for writing, but also very dangerous.
You're welcome!
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10 Years Ago
I agree about that. I have server depression, and I usually write when I feel the strong urge to giv.. read moreI agree about that. I have server depression, and I usually write when I feel the strong urge to give up. I actually wrote a story about a girl who goes through depression and ends up dead because of it. But anyway, you review has made my day:3
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10 Years Ago
Im so glad to hear that I helped someone
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