Twilight Glory

Peering over

The exotic meadows

Telling stories

Casting skillful shadows

Waterfall pounding

It wakes my senses

Butterflies flicker

Their wings, a crescent

A canopy of flowers

The aroma of pine

Magnificent sunset

It sends shivers down my spine

I inhale

Breathing in the lands beauty

Witnessing nature

So relaxing...my eyes get droopy

My body now limp

A crusade of song

The waves silently motion

That this is where I belong. 

Author's Note

This is one place I would go to for a vacation!

Reviews

[LittleLover]

I love this, its definitely is my favorite of all time of yours, sounds like a wonderful place! Great job Ash, keep on writing!!! :)

[Asb]

it's a beautiful description.... :)

[Tamia123]

This is really good :) I would love to go there!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the place you described in your poem. Nice to find a place free of city and a lot of people. I like the desire and places you took me in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Marie]

This has both beauty and comfort...dreaming on the edge of twilight...

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the structure of your short lines...wish I were writing like this in high school!


My best,
Kelly