Help me

This is a song I wrote off the top of my head and now it's a poem. Enjoy.

Mama is crying on the floor

Its not like I havent seen it before

Daddy is drunk and pissed again

Because mommy's f*****g all his friends

 

And now mommy has two black eyes

Shes breathing slowly and about to die

But daddy got mad so I went to hide

Daddy left me hallow inside

 

I still hear his voice today

And all the naughty words he say

He didn't love me cuz I looked like her

And I'd never call that mother f****r sir

 

I stand here with tears rolling down my face

Faded memories worse than mace

To that day were I was almost missed

And almost died from his bloody fist

 

Help me I'm barely breathing

I'm bleeding on the pavement cuz you're an aggressive raven

Save me my life suceeding

I'm bleeding on the pavement cuz you're an aggressive raven

 

Hey son you didn't see nothing back there

Don't you start to think someone else would care

If you call the cops on daddy you won't make it out alive

So come where I can see you stop trying to hide

 

I'm not a drunk like your mama said I'm not like that

You better believe me or I'll beat your scrawny a*s

So come out of hiding you shouldn't be scared

Nothing has changed no one cares

 

Hey there you are where you going Sonny

You ain't leaving this house you don't got money

Why you opening the door you think you're funny

Get your a*s back here you better stop running

 

I'll catch you you little b*****d

And then I'm gonna kill you like I killed her

Stand up and fight if you think you're tough

The neighbor ain't home you better pack your stuff

 

Your going to heaven to live with your mom

I have to take you out of this world now its my job

Your gonna have a nice trip up there first class and all

Hey put down that phone your not gonna call

 

Ha I caught you f****r you're screwed now

I'll get rid of your bodies somehow

Here comes my fist you're going to be dead

I'm gonna make blood pour out of your head

 

Barried in a backyard as a little kid

I am gone faster than dust in the wind

Why am I gone I commited no sin

Help me because now I'm dead from him

 

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy. this is a song I turned into a poem.

Reviews

[Adrian X Fuentess]

It's very Slim Shady. I like it!
This one I enjoyed very much.
I just hope all of your writing is just part of your talent, and that you're okay at home.

[Thea]

I hope someone will put a melody to it...In that way, I think it will really turn out great! The poem's idea is someone sad yet it is still well written. Great work!
:)))