Blood

This is a poem that I am writing off the top of my head. I was inspired by a book I was reading.

I scream at the sky

I really want to die

So I dig the knife in

And I feel relieved inside

 

People call me crazy
All I say is maybe

I hope that one day

Someone will come and save me

 

But right now this is the only way

To get through life day by day

Everytime I try to make friends

All they do is call me fake

 

So I try to end it all

I try to stand tall

But then I get pushed over

And I bounce off the walls

 

So with cuts on my wrists

I try not to get pissed

But I'm mad al myself

For giving in

 

So I go to the top

And I don't try to stop

I try to fly

And so I jump off

Author's Note

This just came to the top of my head. I hope you enjoy. Thank you for your reviews.

Reviews

[Deanna]

*sigh* I am speechless its wonderful, yet its horrible. Its horrible by the truth in it how may people see it like that. But wonderful because it captures everything. Everyone feels like they want to end it all, and get mad at themselves when they don't so its always a struggle. Well done.

[Adrian X Fuentess]

I LOVE this one. And I hate it too, in a good way though.
I know the feeling; I used to this as well, and it sucks. I hope this is only a poem and nothing else. If you, or anyone else, is cutting, please seek for help. There are other ways to deal with pain. I know.
The imagery is there. Likes.

[Thea]

Wow...The poem is so powerful...You've crafted such an interesting piece again...Well done!
:)))

[Katelyn]

I can relate to this poem. I find truth in this poem. My favorite part is the last stanza. You did a great job!