~ The Little Box

~ The most precious things we save in it...

~ The little Box 

 

Where did I find you my little box?

Let me remember, within the travel of my mind,

You took me away with you that night

In the decades of time alone and left behind

 

Your doors opened into a beautiful garden

Angels, and Elves danced with harps in their hands

Their humming peaceful sounds were a path to follow

The stones, as a road to lead and be one with the lands

 

The soft little music was leading me,

And the birds of love flew upon there

The world was much kinder, and less selfish

A voyage of peace, musing elegant, and rare

 

I left my high heels, and started to run barefoot

The fresh moss tickled my feet

The wind blew softly and fluent

A castle in my sight, I knew I had "you" to meet

 

Kept on running harder and harder…

The leading music became so lovely the closer I was,

You were singing to me, out of the box

As I was following the sound of your silent vox

 

I found you there, so tiny and alone

The little box, had made you live inside it’s heart,

You couldn’t talk, but sing, hum, and jump

Of happiness you were nevermore apart

 

Of the souls proprietor which found your second life

And brought it back to her world to stay

In the drawer of her bedside table,

For  you to sing her goodnight into each new day

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

An older piece of me, rewritten... Enjoy! -x-

Thank You.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is timeless..."Your doors opened into a beautiful garden
Angels, and Elves danced with harps in their hands
Their humming peaceful sounds were a path to follow
The stones, as a road to lead and be one with the lands"~ Eli, your talent never ceases to amaze me. I am at awe at the beauty of this whimsical masterpiece. A Mesmerizing write!

Aww thank you so much deary, I hope you enjoyed, love to escape into a new chapter or a world sometimes... xoxo

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was so beautiful! The music and your words took me on a stunning journey, one I will have to go on again! Going into my favorites so I can do just that!

Thanks dear X

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You're so welcome! I must visit your page more often!

As I have to do yours! I've missed your work! :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I loved it, as always in awe of your writings! You are gifted and most talented friend. Your mind and spirit were crafted by a most talented and healing of souls!

Thanks soulsister, you're so kind! XO

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

No dear, just honest ;)

Even better :D:D Thanks.... ♥

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I bet i know where you found that box... in the enchanted land of your dreams when innocence fueled your desires... oh to be able to go back to those carefree days just for one day.

Yes, those days Dale, where my name is Gilraen Culnamo... thank you so much!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are more than welcome, it was my pleasure.

[TheSweet]

This one is a little different. I'm reading it as an extended metaphor, but if it is, it'd be interesting to know where you got the inspiration from. I mean, it seems like a familiar concept - though it might be the music, which is deffinitely familiar.

The music is from sToa, one of my favorite mystical music composers... The notes are always rich, and full of feeling. The story in the poem is just wat popped yesterday out of my fantasy, it has a meaning to keep all what was good in a box forevermore to shine on important moments.... Thank you so much!

[Extant]

A wonderful story you have versed about finding yourself.

[MOON]

This is so beautiful , lyrical love how you imbue the box with such treasures with your words.

Thank you Moon

[Pax]

beautiful write that puts a creative story behind the photo.great work my friend.

Thank you so much X

[Kenneth The Poet]

A beautiful box, it may be little but descriptions make it so much bigger. Love the rhyme and meter of this too.

Thank you so much! :)

[Distant horizons]

Sounds to me like you have found a treasure to cherish, one that makes memories, never to be forgotten. Beautifully captured, as ever Elisa

There are so much treasures in life... some sing, others, cook, others smile, others look...

Thank you so much :)