~ The Little Box

~ The most precious things we save in it...

~ The little Box 

 

Where did I find you my little box?

Let me remember, within the travel of my mind,

You took me away with you that night

In the decades of time alone and left behind

 

Your doors opened into a beautiful garden

Angels, and Elves danced with harps in their hands

Their humming peaceful sounds were a path to follow

The stones, as a road to lead and be one with the lands

 

The soft little music was leading me,

And the birds of love flew upon there

The world was much kinder, and less selfish

A voyage of peace, musing elegant, and rare

 

I left my high heels, and started to run barefoot

The fresh moss tickled my feet

The wind blew softly and fluent

A castle in my sight, I knew I had "you" to meet

 

Kept on running harder and harder…

The leading music became so lovely the closer I was,

You were singing to me, out of the box

As I was following the sound of your silent vox

 

I found you there, so tiny and alone

The little box, had made you live inside it’s heart,

You couldn’t talk, but sing, hum, and jump

Of happiness you were nevermore apart

 

Of the souls proprietor which found your second life

And brought it back to her world to stay

In the drawer of her bedside table,

For  you to sing her goodnight into each new day

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

An older piece of me, rewritten... Enjoy! -x-

Thank You.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is timeless..."Your doors opened into a beautiful garden
Angels, and Elves danced with harps in their hands
Their humming peaceful sounds were a path to follow
The stones, as a road to lead and be one with the lands"~ Eli, your talent never ceases to amaze me. I am at awe at the beauty of this whimsical masterpiece. A Mesmerizing write!

Aww thank you so much deary, I hope you enjoyed, love to escape into a new chapter or a world sometimes... xoxo

[Tate Morgan]

Yours must be a beautiful life

I have one, but, forever musing...

[V]

Cute one :-) Makes me reminisce ;-)

Thank you sweety xo

[V]

You're welcome :-) I'm writing so much and endlessly at the mom but I can't share anything new. Just writing for the manuscript for a huge and serious publisher.Would be kind of unprofessional to share most of the writings for a collection...xxx

I wish you good luck with all dear... :D

[V]

Thanks hun :-)

[Debbie_Philly]

Oh WOW..... took my breath away.... just stunning... and the music in the back ground... just a beautiful touch.... this is so lovely !!!

Thank you dear :)

[Debbie_Philly]

:)

[An owl on the moon]

So beautifully bittersweet... Your imagery is magical, and you leave your reader enchanted, in search of such a treasure...I do believe if one could peek inside you they would find a thousand worlds, and every one of them would be wondrous...

Thank you Craig, for your outstanding review!

[light and ashes]

So beautiful, this is just a magnificent piece. So lovely and unique, also a little tragic because her prince can not come out of the box, 100

Thank you dear xx

[light and ashes]

Your welcome :)

[Alicia Beavis]

"found" should be "find" in the opening line, I think.
"within my travel of mind" seems worded awkwardly. Maybe "with the travel of my mind"?

Otherwise, lovely piece. I like the sentiments and the way you use imagery to set the mood. Beautiful!

Thank you Alicia.

[Michael X]

I love the style that you passionate express with a poetic sense of detail
and elegance that is a fairy-tale of beautiful expression, brilliant.

Thank you very much my friend... your meaning is always appreciated :)

[Sam]

Beautiful poem, I like it. :)

Thank you very much :)

[Brittany]

I starting reading this and then I heard this music, that for me, just made this beautiful. There's something else here...something unsaid...that I very much enjoyed. I liked the fantasy element...mystical...magical...

Suggestion: You was singing...You were singing.

Thank you very much, for the wonderful review, and helping me out on the grammar! E.L.