~ The Little Box

~ The most precious things we save in it...

~ The little Box 

 

Where did I find you my little box?

Let me remember, within the travel of my mind,

You took me away with you that night

In the decades of time alone and left behind

 

Your doors opened into a beautiful garden

Angels, and Elves danced with harps in their hands

Their humming peaceful sounds were a path to follow

The stones, as a road to lead and be one with the lands

 

The soft little music was leading me,

And the birds of love flew upon there

The world was much kinder, and less selfish

A voyage of peace, musing elegant, and rare

 

I left my high heels, and started to run barefoot

The fresh moss tickled my feet

The wind blew softly and fluent

A castle in my sight, I knew I had "you" to meet

 

Kept on running harder and harder…

The leading music became so lovely the closer I was,

You were singing to me, out of the box

As I was following the sound of your silent vox

 

I found you there, so tiny and alone

The little box, had made you live inside it’s heart,

You couldn’t talk, but sing, hum, and jump

Of happiness you were nevermore apart

 

Of the souls proprietor which found your second life

And brought it back to her world to stay

In the drawer of her bedside table,

For  you to sing her goodnight into each new day

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

An older piece of me, rewritten... Enjoy! -x-

Thank You.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is timeless..."Your doors opened into a beautiful garden
Angels, and Elves danced with harps in their hands
Their humming peaceful sounds were a path to follow
The stones, as a road to lead and be one with the lands"~ Eli, your talent never ceases to amaze me. I am at awe at the beauty of this whimsical masterpiece. A Mesmerizing write!

Aww thank you so much deary, I hope you enjoyed, love to escape into a new chapter or a world sometimes... xoxo

[Horizon K.]

Oh Sis, I was thinking of you just right now, and then i saw you had posted this... And sorry, that I haven't been around more... In the past, I have told friends that I care for, that I will keep them in my treasure box, some safe place in my heart where precious moments can be preserved forever... This beautiful poem of yours make me think of that... So I imagine, if I were to tuck into that box, a fervent love... how it would feel like everything beautiful you have said here, like dancing barefoot across the gardens of a palace, to the most lovely of music, to open that box again... and find that heart is still there, perfect and wildly alive ,along with all of that love... So beautiful, dear Elisa...

Oh, I so love your review Sis... Yes, the little box is one to treasure the most lovely inside of it... :) to have this person forever with me... Your words mean the world to me. I will send you soon a long mail my dear, hugs -xxx-

[Deuces]

You always create such beautiful imagery with your poems. This is no exception and is just flawless. You tell such amazing stories. Loved it. You gave life to an object that would usually be stationary. Great work.

Thank you so so much G. It means the world to me, you loved this one, it's 2 years old lol... did rewritten it a bit, but it was needed to post it again.... for history and dreams repeat.... thank you thank you. -x- :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

for me this little box contains the treasure of the heart, which no one could really see and find but you, the person who has it! I feel atmosphere of melancholy and joy in the same time, the poem exists in its magical world, out of our time. That`s the real human time of the box. amazing!

Yes, that was my intention when I wrote it... :) many thank yous! xo

[Empirik]

Such a great concept and theme to write about. Fantasy at it's true best! Love it...always!!! X :) You are sensational dear!

Oh dear, you are sensational.... what would this flying Dutchie be without you lol....? xo

[Empirik]

:)

:P X

[Corset]

Can I just crawl into the peaceful beautiful of your poems and just stay here? such a beauty! :)

Thank you so much Corset xx

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful like always!!!! this is so amazing... it takes my breath away! Opens to a dream land for me! It makes me want to dress up... hehe and run around and just feel the wind... I love this Elisa!! I wanna go out and just be silly!!! This made me smile. Thanks!

Hehe thanks love, for your always so happy and sweet reviews, they make me so smile :D xoxo

[Sleeping Maiden]

No problem! I'm thankful you write these poems for us to read!! =) it brightens my day especially when im sad! ^^ Hope you have a wonderful day!

I love you my friend, made me so happy I could reach you! xo

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

E.L. this is gorgeous! The rhythm and rhyme fantastic.

Thank you very much Neva :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

What an enchanting tale of precious memories locked in this gorgeous trinket of loveliness filled with memories of fond times gone by.

Keep hold of your cool little box, once was lost in past and found again now in your present!

Reads like a page from Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland....

Written by a true poetess.....

Thank you very much :)

[Legolas]

Such a wonderful and fantastic poem!! I loved it! Perhaps add a comma after you in the first line? Im not sure about you but to me it would make the line a little more shaped.

Thank you, will look that up ;)

[Legolas]

Your welcome:)

[Muse]

:)))

I love it when a poem is full of whimsy! I wanted to get naked and dance in the rain while blaring this wonderful tune! Sorry...but next time don't be so inspiring. It almost made me feel childlike...when I used to play dress up, and twirling and dancing....tossing my hair around....lol, I was a prissy girl...waiting to get wings so that I might fly away and find my Prince Charming. Bowing at your feet I am...so many pale in comparison when it comes to your beauty and talents....gorgeous! x

Thank you so much Muse, well this was actually a write wich popped up in my mind within a few seconds, I had a thought, and I wrote it down, with my black ink and my fountain pen, a real fountain pen lover all my life... I thought, or this will flush the WC, or it shall dance, like I did in my head... Thank you dear. xo

[Muse]

You made us all dance...with and without clothes. lol

luv you!

Hihi.... lol.... how did you know I was nude?? haha :D hope my long black hair covered my tits ;) ooops.... love you too xo

[Muse]

nope...saw your butterfly pasties. ha ha ha

Ohohoho... you secret watcher :P

[Muse]

Well...I'm busted...don't tell my husband.

Blushing.

I won't don't tell mine either :P hahaha