~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

~ As it's the way to grace

~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

 

 

 

 

Marks you left behind, in thoughts for me to find,

Dripping like the rain on my soul

Days of destiny, in fate of our realm

Fresh, for a new born day in it’s recall

Where did we lose the path of wisdom overall?

Slumbers, reach, and bliss shall fade away

With you not near me, I shall overcome

But in the final day I shall scream your name

Between the time is lost, and not the same…

Next worlds open in moving journeys, 

As history repeat itself so wisely always

Within the invisible thought,

We shall jump like children on fresh grass

Take the insight to a lower level, and make joy

Feed the ducks, and walk and hike

Where no poison is left behind, to find…

And where a purity of you shall live the maximal

Within the arms, of love in full metal

And the heart which beats shall melt

All what has mattered to this love so grand

Shall rain on you in Karma's hand

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Legacy]

Elisa Laura,

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Starting with this - Yes I downloaded it to my computer. Such a beautiful piece, compliments your write. Nicely Done

For the Piece - Rating 100

Who is this man not to see and feel what he has or has had.

Curtains drawn on a splendid piece.

Thank you for the privileged of reading.

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy

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[Rae Elizabeth]

Beautiful. Great use of imagery ~

[Stacey Watts]

This is beautiful. The words truly paint a perfect masterpiece here. I always find myself getting lost in your words. I always applaud your art with music and words. You always present a fantastic piece.

[light and ashes]

Such a exquisite and beautiful poem

[SHEEMA HUQ]

A superbly nuanced declaration to a spiritual soul mate which is just amazing to read. Thanks and hugs from Londres.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Pure eloquence are your words... the rain can be very sensual when with a love one... and when it is with a soul mate then it is purely magical. the last four lines are an adrenaline rush for the heart.

[Corset]

Where did we lost the path, I think was suppose to be "lose", and this is a scream in my soul, beautiful work, truly beautiful.

[Natasha]

Elisa,

It's been a while since I've felt the absence of a beat in my chest. This poem did just that. It was absolutely amazing!

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Divine melody :)

I cried when I wrote this one, because it's for the one, who shall feel the ink, thank you my friend Lorry, thank you all! it means much to me. X

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully captured. I wanna go jump on the grass now, i'm gonna, barefoot too :-)