~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

~ As it's the way to grace

~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

 

 

 

 

Marks you left behind, in thoughts for me to find,

Dripping like the rain on my soul

Days of destiny, in fate of our realm

Fresh, for a new born day in it’s recall

Where did we lose the path of wisdom overall?

Slumbers, reach, and bliss shall fade away

With you not near me, I shall overcome

But in the final day I shall scream your name

Between the time is lost, and not the same…

Next worlds open in moving journeys, 

As history repeat itself so wisely always

Within the invisible thought,

We shall jump like children on fresh grass

Take the insight to a lower level, and make joy

Feed the ducks, and walk and hike

Where no poison is left behind, to find…

And where a purity of you shall live the maximal

Within the arms, of love in full metal

And the heart which beats shall melt

All what has mattered to this love so grand

Shall rain on you in Karma's hand

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Legacy]

Elisa Laura,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=oGHBqKm7l8k
Starting with this - Yes I downloaded it to my computer. Such a beautiful piece, compliments your write. Nicely Done

For the Piece - Rating 100

Who is this man not to see and feel what he has or has had.

Curtains drawn on a splendid piece.

Thank you for the privileged of reading.

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy

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[Ink Angel]

We shall jump like children on the fresh grass..........perfect indeed.

[Ink Angel]

This reduced me to tears this morning, such beauty, such precious imagery. Its breathtaking, a stunning work of art..... The piece of music perfect. Thank you for sharing.

[michael.c.m]

a truly beautiful work of art.

[Emerald Seas]

Beautiful Eli - there is an ease to this write that adds depth to the emotion penned within it. I don't know what music is playing, but it is fabulous as a backdrop to this piece.
Excellent!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Lovely write, E.L.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

“Marks you left behind, in thoughts for me to find,
Dripping like the rain on my soul
Days of destiny, in fate of our realm
Fresh, for a new born day in it’s recall
Where did we lose the path of wisdom overall”?
As always your words are a poetic wonderland to the soul of man. What lies beneath or worn mortal shells a love captivated with wisdom it beckons and compels. Thank you for this wonderful write I loved it so.

[Nautili]

lovely, E.L. It has such an ethereal quality. truly wonderful read.
a couple mistakes (I think): 'where a purity" and "in the final day." Just suggestions to tighten it up a bit.
i really like this one. : )

[MOON]

Stunning write Elisa spoken from the heart about love that transcends time and space. Divinely written.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is breathtaking! Speaks to the soul of lovers. The yearning touches the core.
"Within the arms, of love in full metal
And the heart which beats shall melt
All what has mattered to this love so grand
Shall rain on you in Karma's hand"~ Eloquent, divine work!

[Allie]

This is just so beautiful. Makes me want to take my husband out for a walk. Your way with words and your vocabulary is excellent. Thanks for sharing.