~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

~ As it's the way to grace

~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

 

 

 

 

Marks you left behind, in thoughts for me to find,

Dripping like the rain on my soul

Days of destiny, in fate of our realm

Fresh, for a new born day in it’s recall

Where did we lose the path of wisdom overall?

Slumbers, reach, and bliss shall fade away

With you not near me, I shall overcome

But in the final day I shall scream your name

Between the time is lost, and not the same…

Next worlds open in moving journeys, 

As history repeat itself so wisely always

Within the invisible thought,

We shall jump like children on fresh grass

Take the insight to a lower level, and make joy

Feed the ducks, and walk and hike

Where no poison is left behind, to find…

And where a purity of you shall live the maximal

Within the arms, of love in full metal

And the heart which beats shall melt

All what has mattered to this love so grand

Shall rain on you in Karma's hand

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Legacy]

Elisa Laura,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=oGHBqKm7l8k
Starting with this - Yes I downloaded it to my computer. Such a beautiful piece, compliments your write. Nicely Done

For the Piece - Rating 100

Who is this man not to see and feel what he has or has had.

Curtains drawn on a splendid piece.

Thank you for the privileged of reading.

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy

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[Joshua W. Harris]

This is absolutely beautiful. When the music was playing in the background from your note I could envision an entire scene playing out in my mind while I was reading.
Fantastic.

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is very emotional! I like your poetic choice of words, your imagery and flow, specially that picture. :P
I specially like the last 5 lines.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[realmwriter]

Reads tome as a person who has found their soul mate. Very moving.

[johndoenobody]

Bravo

[A. Shea]

This is really amazing! It is so beautiful and reads fluidly. Great writing...

[Leigh]

Great descriptives

[Dean Kuch®]

..."With you not near me, I shall overcome
But in the final day I shall scream your name
Between the time is lost, and not the same..."
These particular three stanzas did it for me. A stunningly beautiful piece of work!

[K-mo]

This is simply amazing!

[Bare trees]

Beautiful poetry. Like the picture as well.

[no sun]

I love the title. Very casual and eye catching. The poem itself is incredible. Filled with solid word choices and brilliant descriptions. An excellent write.