~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

~ As it's the way to grace

~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

 

 

 

 

Marks you left behind, in thoughts for me to find,

Dripping like the rain on my soul

Days of destiny, in fate of our realm

Fresh, for a new born day in it’s recall

Where did we lose the path of wisdom overall?

Slumbers, reach, and bliss shall fade away

With you not near me, I shall overcome

But in the final day I shall scream your name

Between the time is lost, and not the same…

Next worlds open in moving journeys, 

As history repeat itself so wisely always

Within the invisible thought,

We shall jump like children on fresh grass

Take the insight to a lower level, and make joy

Feed the ducks, and walk and hike

Where no poison is left behind, to find…

And where a purity of you shall live the maximal

Within the arms, of love in full metal

And the heart which beats shall melt

All what has mattered to this love so grand

Shall rain on you in Karma's hand

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Legacy]

Elisa Laura,

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Starting with this - Yes I downloaded it to my computer. Such a beautiful piece, compliments your write. Nicely Done

For the Piece - Rating 100

Who is this man not to see and feel what he has or has had.

Curtains drawn on a splendid piece.

Thank you for the privileged of reading.

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy

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[WhiteWillow]

So poignant and full of sorrow. And yet, there's hope for an endless kind of love. Simply beautiful.

Thank you dear WhiteWillow :) your words always mean much to me.

[sithlordjp]

Love how this one came full circle, from the "rain on my soul" of the beggining to the "rain on you in Karma's hand" of that beautiful endind. An entire world in this rain, filled with passion and emotions. Difficult to make the rain interesting in poetry, it is so overused, but you managed to do something fresh and new! My favorites lines of this piece are: "But in the final day I shall scream your name /Between the time is lost, and not the same…" I read them outloud a few times, letting them sink in, just beautiful words Elisa...

You have no idea how honored you make me feel, by speaking my words out loud... that is beautiful. I am so pleased you enjoyed this write... it came out of my toes, maybe that's what you felt here... :) Thank you J.P. :D

[Frieda P]

This is lyrical genius, I feel the suffering and the hope. I love every word, it weaves together such a melancholy tune to me, brilliant write, again!

Thank you so much dear, this was also one of the older ones, I'm so glad you loved it... I remember I cried when I wrote it, it came pure out of my heart... in a difficult time.

[Missy Moooooo]

This is beautiful

Thank you Missy, nice to see you around :)

[Missy Moooooo]

Thank you. It's nice to be back around.

:-) happy to have you :D

[Missy Moooooo]

Thank you :D

[silvereyes]

I loved these lines
"But in the final day I shall scream your name
Between the time is lost, and not the same…"

Nice poem overall :-).

Thank you very much silvereyes. :)

[oxo]

lovely. :)

Thank you so much dear xoxo

[Sugar Plum ♥]

your poems are full with purity and energy of inspiration, desire to see and view far away, even have mind of adventurer! this piece of love is wonderful!
specially this verses make me think :
Between the time is lost, and not the same…

Next worlds open in moving journeys,

As history repeat itself so wisely always

Within the invisible thought

Thank you so much dear, you have a wise keen eye you pick those lines out... xo

[Empirik]

A masterpiece! So lovely written with a natural progression like rain of lingual groupings all around wetting the ground of mouth inside all weather. Great! X :)

[A. V. Madison]

Elisa! Splendid, stellar, beautiful, gorgeous, pretty, lovely, amazing, flabbergasting, original, unique, mesmerizing, intelligent, hypnotizing- I would go on but it would take forever.

Oh thank you so much for your lovely review!!!! xo

[Michael X]

an ethereal vision of another place and time, the feeling is touching eternity
in shades of grey, wow, breathtaking in its expression of insight, outstanding

Thank you my dear friend... glad you enjoyed it :)