~ Dervish

~ One who let in all, shall receive all...

~ Dervish

 

Where land faded, and sandstorms blew

I found the ground of comfort

Pearls of heavenly teardrops, never touched

The beauty of the land, as it was rich

Solved and smiling grand

 

Mint tea I sipped when I sat in some places

Eyes, open to all the livingly mazes

An opening world of the old rich cultures

Relived by yourself in a travel of mind

Hardly to muse, but easy to find

 

Miles away from home, and so divinely rich

Realms of stories, punched through my chest

Mystery in a thousand ways, questioning

The daily grace, still I wonder why I smelled

Your perfume there so overwhelmed

 

As a fresh breeze tickling on my nerves

You passed by through mighty ways

Knocking on my soul and kiss my aura

I Loved to feel the frosty nights,

And your warmly breath around me tight

 

There is a way I find you in every continent

As I breathe or drink your seductive poison

I only not die of it but reborn and rebirth

Like you know telepathy smiles in a million silent words

Yes, Yes, Dervish soul, of heaven you shall be heard

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Travel with me... I wink at you...
xx

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I really like when poems take me to a whole different place in a writer's mind, let it escape from reality and jump right into the writer's imganation! You're poem did that. You decribe beautifully! It's very mysterious but romantic in a weird and brilliant way. You really should become a published writer. You're poetry book will rank the charts!

Did I already said thank you Gregster? ;) my friend, well now, Thank you so much!

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This is a dream I used to have when I was a child. I could even feel myself descend. Exotic, rich poetry!

[Southern Cross]

I am so enjoying traveling with you and reading your beautiful words. To listen to your heart along the way filled with passion and love. You are quite unique and oh so enjoyable !

[S. Michael Long]

reminds me of the whirling dervishes (: love it. -s

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Amazing.
I love the feel of your poetry, the mystery of the lands of sand, the metamorphosis of lusts poisoned kiss. You are an amazing writer. I am grateful to read your enticement of this verbal journey. Thank you for this.