~ Dervish

~ One who let in all, shall receive all...

~ Dervish

 

Where land faded, and sandstorms blew

I found the ground of comfort

Pearls of heavenly teardrops, never touched

The beauty of the land, as it was rich

Solved and smiling grand

 

Mint tea I sipped when I sat in some places

Eyes, open to all the livingly mazes

An opening world of the old rich cultures

Relived by yourself in a travel of mind

Hardly to muse, but easy to find

 

Miles away from home, and so divinely rich

Realms of stories, punched through my chest

Mystery in a thousand ways, questioning

The daily grace, still I wonder why I smelled

Your perfume there so overwhelmed

 

As a fresh breeze tickling on my nerves

You passed by through mighty ways

Knocking on my soul and kiss my aura

I Loved to feel the frosty nights,

And your warmly breath around me tight

 

There is a way I find you in every continent

As I breathe or drink your seductive poison

I only not die of it but reborn and rebirth

Like you know telepathy smiles in a million silent words

Yes, Yes, Dervish soul, of heaven you shall be heard

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Travel with me... I wink at you...
xx

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I really like when poems take me to a whole different place in a writer's mind, let it escape from reality and jump right into the writer's imganation! You're poem did that. You decribe beautifully! It's very mysterious but romantic in a weird and brilliant way. You really should become a published writer. You're poetry book will rank the charts!

Did I already said thank you Gregster? ;) my friend, well now, Thank you so much!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Stunning! I'm mesmerized!...I am so taking by your masterful work of art. To read this is to take a journey into your prolific mind. Untainted, Pure, Timeless....
Such a beautiful imagery weaved in your surreal world! Breathtaking!

[An owl on the moon]

An exquisite, exotic write that moves on the music of your words... Richly woven like a tapestry, dark and rich like a fine drink, you sing a sensual, sweet song both personal and vast... the soul's landscape come alive...

[khalid]

i already live this life! amazing poem

[A Jainam Mehta]

Wonderfully written. loved the journey of words.. the journey of soul.

[michael.c.m]

absolutely stunning. Deep, rich and immensely spiritual. And the music...I had to go meditate after this.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I enjoyed the travelling with your poetic words. Great job. With regards.

[Pax]

sweet, touching and beautiful. great write.

[Raven Starhawk]

Such exquisite words sown together to make a masterpiece. This was majestic, and really inspiring as I search each stanza and fall in love with every one.

[Renée]

Sand, Mint tea..the music...the world & its people are amazing.. all the senses that come alive as one wanders about..nice poem & music E.L.

[Kenneth The Poet]

One trip through a beautiful Orient I think.