~ Dervish

~ One who let in all, shall receive all...

~ Dervish

 

Where land faded, and sandstorms blew

I found the ground of comfort

Pearls of heavenly teardrops, never touched

The beauty of the land, as it was rich

Solved and smiling grand

 

Mint tea I sipped when I sat in some places

Eyes, open to all the livingly mazes

An opening world of the old rich cultures

Relived by yourself in a travel of mind

Hardly to muse, but easy to find

 

Miles away from home, and so divinely rich

Realms of stories, punched through my chest

Mystery in a thousand ways, questioning

The daily grace, still I wonder why I smelled

Your perfume there so overwhelmed

 

As a fresh breeze tickling on my nerves

You passed by through mighty ways

Knocking on my soul and kiss my aura

I Loved to feel the frosty nights,

And your warmly breath around me tight

 

There is a way I find you in every continent

As I breathe or drink your seductive poison

I only not die of it but reborn and rebirth

Like you know telepathy smiles in a million silent words

Yes, Yes, Dervish soul, of heaven you shall be heard

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Travel with me... I wink at you...
xx

Reviews

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I really like when poems take me to a whole different place in a writer's mind, let it escape from reality and jump right into the writer's imganation! You're poem did that. You decribe beautifully! It's very mysterious but romantic in a weird and brilliant way. You really should become a published writer. You're poetry book will rank the charts!

Did I already said thank you Gregster? ;) my friend, well now, Thank you so much!

[zainul]

Captivating poem.
Congratulations.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oh wow, this is so lovely! Romantic and so dreamy for sure... i love the imagery you make here. =) I love the picture too! Your choice of music makes this even more awesome! I love how your muse captivated you to write...
Beautiful...
I enjoyed this so much Elisa! Thank you!

[Stacey Watts]

Wow this is a very beautiful and stunning piece. The imagery is wonderful and you always paint a beautiful picture. I enjoyed reading this. Nicely done.

[R J Askew]

I love the romance of this. Travel, o to travel! If we can't do it physically we can do it in our minds and your poem evokes the place the spirit of it, a place and spirit outside Europe and our material reality. At the end I began to wonder if the Dervish might be the spirit of poetry, your muse even. Great read.

[Malcolm J. Watt]

Well Elisa. From the place were comrades fell the dance may lift them once more. The Dervish has cast his spell, All is well.
And as poetry gives the dancer his meanig so...
I smile at you.

[Laura Maidah]

I've said this before and I'll say it again. All Lauras are good poets. I say that as a qualifying member of course. I am a Laura as well. Thanks for posting this! I was inspired by a similar picture once. It's a little stifling to have such exotic beauty kind of staring at you.

[Michael X]

wow, absolutely divine interpretation of wanderlust, your words have the
ability to transport the reader to another place and time. loved this!

[Legolas]

Nice job:) loved the musical accompany:) your words are so deep and well written. Keep it up!

[quinfinn]

clever and provocative piece here... i like. uniquely worded and original.

[Alicia Beavis]

I think "mistery" is suppose to be "mystery".

Otherwise, a very nicely written piece. Lovely imagery and great flow!