~ Paris with Him

~ Un véritable voyage avec lui...

~ Paris with Him

 

I felt obvious a lady how he treated me

When I walked with him on the Champs-Élysées

The colors of the crowd were neutral,

But our love yet so hungry like the smell of fresh coffee

And the fresh baked  croissants across the street corners

It made our love more than vividly alive...

 

A glimpse of some street artists,

And accordion players with their delightful music

Made me relive the days of the past

I felt the romance in it’s pure forms, that night

As the cars drove too fast as we missed their slightly sight

Standing there with you underneath the Arc de Triomphe

 

Feeling your arms around me and your wondeful eyes,

Your dark hair as always dances in the wind

And your glimpse of love is the hottest of mankind

I can drown in the arms that are you filled with trust

The way you fulfill me is like a thousand summers long

The gift of handle my freedom, is rich in you my man, a must

 ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Just click, for some " atmosphère"

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Empirik]

This is smoothly breathtaking! I felt it's every word together in splendid form and perfect structure, telling such a rich story of two in a moment to last forever. It left me a little speechless and comforted in a gasping physical moment wrapped up in a love that fully satisfies the soul. Lovely! This has me in air. X :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful.. This is amazing and I love it!! xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

All I can do is sigh cause I am speechless from being in awe of your words.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is lovely! The Romantic ambiance you have depicted sets the tone, and feels as if I am in Paris.... I can smell the coffee, taste the croissants and feel the energy! Smooth and lovely is this piece... Love is in the air! ~xo~

[Luciole]

figure it's appropriate to give a review in French- Luckily there is Google Translate LOL

Absolument magnifiquement écrit. J'aime la façon dont vous le structuré. Ajout d'une envie de voyager et un toucher de l'amour.

[Absolutely beautifully written. I love the way you structured it. Adding a want to travel and a feel of love.]
:)

[Eve]

Have always wanted to stand beneath the Arc de Triomphe, I had a dream about it once, crazy dream, I love the sights and smells in this write, as if I am finally there to enjoy all the things you have written about, you have whisked me away on the hopes of a prayer that one day I will see it for myself.

[Allie]

You made me feel like I was really there! Beautiful! You make me want to be her.

[I Shred This Cabbage]

ah like children left to dream, talk and act out imagination,
she will be a woman living fully and he a man of integrity, and who am i to deny it!

a beautiful, romantic love, floating in her eyes like multiple moons :) beautiful!

[MOON]

Smell the coffee and the romance . Lovely write .

[Leslie Philibert]

Great poem. I love poems with food in them, coffee and croissants, and everybody loves Paris. Nice work.

[Distant horizons]

I can never read of Paris without hearing the guitar solo of parissiene walkways, its why i love the place so much and keep going back. Wonderfully captured essence of the streets of Paris and i could almost smell rge coffee and boullangerie tempting my nostrils. Perfect.