~ Ardens Amor, - Potestatem Ventum Fortis

~ Ardens Amor, - Potestatem Ventum Fortis

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~ Like dust in the wind...

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~ Ardens Amor, - Potestatem Ventum Fortis





In the roads where I lost you, I found you back in the writing of the stars

If I missed you, the music flowed through the ether,

And with true color I could relive our realm…

Your presence was always slightly more than anyone could ever afford

The problems were gone as gold for the sun to shine,

And you were the days with no days but deeper nights.

Like time, was not to grow, but standing still all divine.

 

The strength of the northern atmosphere so far, but the same routing

Seas are small but insignificant waters, as love is lightly universal

Wondering thoughts so powerful words found in disclosure

The mills by the Dutch landscape, blowing in the round,

If I ever get closer to you again,  please do keep sending me the wings

Or some windmills to blow me in dusty ways to the other side of the world

Like the cryptic logical thinking had lost by the heart of simplicity

 

And the wind just was more powerful, than any rational thought…

There is nothing more beautiful than the force of desire, in the deepest illusion

From here and now, nothing is as keen as everyone infatuated with it to live

Just let me be in former times, as I go away from here, with my beloved

In landscapes painted by Monet, and a harmony of perfection

Where this world only by morals and meaninglessness shall be left behind…

And no grace shall turn, as all is dead and transience within the core of ruining

 

They can melt together in tides of peace, of purity and culture,

Where nothing is too commercial, nor too expensive, just honest and upfront

And yet the love was something special, where poetry was written, and appreciated,

The wavy hair, clothing and thoughts that were not clichéd but profound.

Where they could see themselves proper to be, and not walked behind the fashion…

And values were richer than the gold we handled in Amsterdam,

And were salt, pepper, and spices, were gold for food.

 

If I close my eyes, I imagine myself back in a time machine

Where he and I together by the windmills will be found

Pushing and flowing, like sailors in a storm, and waves to drown,

But the inner strength will not sink, but overcome the highest trouble

Like strength in a mother with a new born child,

Or the freedom of being is not left behind, within the journey

If the sun and moons, reflection are no time but just real love...






~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

~ A Dutch breeze... Thank you xx


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so much beauty in this picture of purity, love windmills! :)
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If I ever get closer to you again, please do keep sending me the wings

Or some windmills to blow me in dusty ways to the other side of the world

Like the cryptic logical thinking had lost by the heart of simplicity


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear xxx



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You have taken us to heaven and beyond with this romantic power named E.L.!
You seem to always write what I am feeling, and the others as well I'm sure, in the mind of love every thought is shared.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you sweets, it was an older one of me... I'm sorry I'm out of normal internet so it can take a.. read more
Corset

12 Years Ago

it's ok, not necessary, my poems are more for myself, lol, of course you are always welcome though, .. read more
so much beauty in this picture of purity, love windmills! :)
* *
If I ever get closer to you again, please do keep sending me the wings

Or some windmills to blow me in dusty ways to the other side of the world

Like the cryptic logical thinking had lost by the heart of simplicity


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear xxx
:-) Beautiful writing again. I would rate it at 1000% if possible but 100% will have to do for now. :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A stunningly beautiful poem! You express love so beautifully and the flow and description the entire piece has is impressive. Brilliant work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am truly at a loss to paraphrase words that would define what it felt to read this! What a caliber of talent it took, my friend! I am throwing a bouquet of roses upon the stage for you...as I shout, "bravo"!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Splendid sweet sister of my soul. I couldn't help but be taken back in time to another poetess who wrote of ether. She was very ill and has passed from this world now, but oh such a splendid writer. You are just as good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Goosebumps Eli!!... That's what I feel as I read this.

I am swept away in your World of Yesterday... like a movie or a dream...
You take the reader to another time, another place, of beautiful moments with your love. Stunning! ... This is truly Stunning!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was truly amazing... I was deeply enthralled by the combination of intellect and emotion I really love this part..

They can melt together in tides of peace, of purity and culture,
Where nothing is too commercial, nor too expensive, just honest and upfront

cause you can not fix relationships with money or gifts, only sincerity, understanding and love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a powerful, poignant,honest write E.L.
I read it twice just because it felt good to read and listen to the beautiful combination of words blending together effortlessly into a classically told love story.
I can feel this was written totally from the heart.
loved it
allen
BTW, beautiful video...I never knew windmills could and were so picturesque and unique...



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh! What good can I say that hasn't already be said? This is just Oh! Lol. I mean the creativity has no limit in this peace. So beautiful, so creative, so powerful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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