~ Neon Love

~ Some clues are just remarkable

~ Neon Love

 

The glimpse of your love is as

The tides of all seasons,

Reflected in your eyes

Of happiness you sparkle

 

Your passion wrapped in mine

Merged into one

Is like some candy on a hot summer day

As I taste sweet within your sugar

 

The walks we make,

Are  exciting and warm-blooded

The tickle of sand between the toes

And your arm around me

 

Let me live and thrive

In full colorful glory

Without much need or to do,

Your presence is just gold

 

Neon Love, as you are completely

With the blue reflectance of the tides

Your radiation does illuminate

And your salty strength breathes life

 

Where I will get lost in

And you may find me

Within the strength of love

And blue oceans to follow

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Steven]

First, I loved the picture. I felt like I was at some sunset bar drinking scotch. Especially with the music. Then I looked at the lights again, and frowned, thinking how ugly it would all be in the morning, lol. Anyway, you captured those moments well, portrayed them artfully, and I for one felt the impact. Nice write.

Thank you Steven :)

[Desert Dreamer]

This is beautiful, it takes me away to a place in my imagination.

[Distant horizons]

PS . . . Meant to say from first to last :-)

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written, DRM first to last

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

You are writing really well of late I've noticed. This was lovely!

You must be in a good state, to be able to write like this. Blessings and embraces to you.

[closed..acct]

Such a wonderful and beuatiful write.
A most amazing read.

[The White Wolf]

Your words make me feel at home. This was absolutely exquisite. Perfect. Nothing else can be said or I would take away from it.

[EMF]

Stunning, beautiful and real. A work of art. Stunning work Lady. Stunning