~ Neon Love

~ Some clues are just remarkable

~ Neon Love

 

The glimpse of your love is as

The tides of all seasons,

Reflected in your eyes

Of happiness you sparkle

 

Your passion wrapped in mine

Merged into one

Is like some candy on a hot summer day

As I taste sweet within your sugar

 

The walks we make,

Are  exciting and warm-blooded

The tickle of sand between the toes

And your arm around me

 

Let me live and thrive

In full colorful glory

Without much need or to do,

Your presence is just gold

 

Neon Love, as you are completely

With the blue reflectance of the tides

Your radiation does illuminate

And your salty strength breathes life

 

Where I will get lost in

And you may find me

Within the strength of love

And blue oceans to follow

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Steven]

First, I loved the picture. I felt like I was at some sunset bar drinking scotch. Especially with the music. Then I looked at the lights again, and frowned, thinking how ugly it would all be in the morning, lol. Anyway, you captured those moments well, portrayed them artfully, and I for one felt the impact. Nice write.

Thank you Steven :)

[ba_mcfarlane]

sweet passion throughout

[V]

Strong words. I like the color image and the passion in your words which transforms from smooth and warmhearted to lively and sparkling by every line. :-) neon love is a really nice expression :-)

[David]

Exciting and warm-blooded,exactly like your work.I'm starting to love your stuff,particularly because they're not all a dank,dark,tank of despair like some others.A1.:)

[Mama Topaz]

Perfect photo for a beautiful poem... this one going in my favorites! Thank you!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am in a speechless awe... a stunning glimpse and soulmate love.

[Muse]

The picture...the beach colored perfectly with the surreal beauty of your words..makes me want to go back to Florida!

Neon Love, as you are completely
With the blue reflectance of the tides
Your radiation does illuminate
And your salty strength breathes life

Romantic and stunning. x

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

The title is captivating so I came to read, too I am never disappointed reading you.
I feel this poem sparkles, it bursts with life, lovely metaphorss and most of all love. , it is gorgeous.

Chloe

[SecretShadow]

simplistically fascinating

[I Shred This Cabbage]

Where I will get lost in/And you may find me/Within the strength of love

is beauitful lyricism. there is a simplicity to these words. i take it as, love is hard but if you have the courage to follow it and not be swayed, it will reward you and bring you a happiness you never knew was possible. i may be wrong!

[Empirik]

Truth lies in the mind of these words flowing in and out of life's tides. High at night and low in the morning with certain swells and some brightness in one to love. This piece of writing was read to me like you were speaking it out loud. I felt like the pages of a journal. The love expressed here is a true expression of how easy and hidden love can be. As we are "merged into one" is a beautiful release of restriction for your soul-mate, and, "radiation does illuminate" is only seen when all circumstances are right for the moment to last forever. It is easily overlooked or not seen unless two have the kind of love to bring it into being. You are inspired! I can read it. I love it! It is like you are right here. Supa love! Great write! See you on the other side of the seas with salt water up to my knees! :) X