First, I loved the picture. I felt like I was at some sunset bar drinking scotch. Especially with the music. Then I looked at the lights again, and frowned, thinking how ugly it would all be in the morning, lol. Anyway, you captured those moments well, portrayed them artfully, and I for one felt the impact. Nice write.
First, I loved the picture. I felt like I was at some sunset bar drinking scotch. Especially with the music. Then I looked at the lights again, and frowned, thinking how ugly it would all be in the morning, lol. Anyway, you captured those moments well, portrayed them artfully, and I for one felt the impact. Nice write.
Warm and romantic, colorful and heartfelt. You can feel the heat of true love
rising up and out of your words. –––And the photograph is just amazing, too.
I'm going to read part II now ;)
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Thank you so much, both are sesoned this one I wrote a year ago, and the last one yesterday in four .. read moreThank you so much, both are sesoned this one I wrote a year ago, and the last one yesterday in four minutes, thanks Diego :)
So utterly romantic! It talks about moments of togetherness where your surroundings gets blur and distant... a neon atmosphere... nothing matters more than the person in front of you... This just transported me to a different world altogether... Your writing is a marvel Emily :)
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Thank you so much Aaran, dear. It was the first part, as you see I didn't comment and gave thank you.. read moreThank you so much Aaran, dear. It was the first part, as you see I didn't comment and gave thank you's to everyone, as I am so grateful for who came by, as in that time the function in WC wasn't there... to thank as in fb beneath. Your words, are great my friend, I appreciate them so much! love and light! from the Netherlands, also from my blue mountain :)
12 Years Ago
Yeah... i will read the second part shortly.... you are always welcome Emily.. it's a learning exper.. read moreYeah... i will read the second part shortly.... you are always welcome Emily.. it's a learning experience to read your work :)
So is yours! tomorrow I am all in concentration, and better health to read your astonishing poetry, .. read moreSo is yours! tomorrow I am all in concentration, and better health to read your astonishing poetry, I will, I will, I'm already addicted lol have a great morning!
12 Years Ago
Thank you Emily... always look forward to your views... your poem too made my day :)
"Salty strength" like that phrase for it denotes a flavorful personality, full of confidence and vigor. Lovely video and music to accompany this refreshing love poem. Wonderful.
Bright summer was moving on and on. And we thought that it would never end. And
we were right, it didn't - the happiest summer together, the saddest summer apart.