~ Neon Love

~ Some clues are just remarkable

~ Neon Love

 

The glimpse of your love is as

The tides of all seasons,

Reflected in your eyes

Of happiness you sparkle

 

Your passion wrapped in mine

Merged into one

Is like some candy on a hot summer day

As I taste sweet within your sugar

 

The walks we make,

Are  exciting and warm-blooded

The tickle of sand between the toes

And your arm around me

 

Let me live and thrive

In full colorful glory

Without much need or to do,

Your presence is just gold

 

Neon Love, as you are completely

With the blue reflectance of the tides

Your radiation does illuminate

And your salty strength breathes life

 

Where I will get lost in

And you may find me

Within the strength of love

And blue oceans to follow

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Steven]

First, I loved the picture. I felt like I was at some sunset bar drinking scotch. Especially with the music. Then I looked at the lights again, and frowned, thinking how ugly it would all be in the morning, lol. Anyway, you captured those moments well, portrayed them artfully, and I for one felt the impact. Nice write.

Thank you Steven :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Pretty. I love the photo

;)

[Tree]

Warm and romantic, colorful and heartfelt. You can feel the heat of true love
rising up and out of your words. –––And the photograph is just amazing, too.
I'm going to read part II now ;)

Thank you so much, both are sesoned this one I wrote a year ago, and the last one yesterday in four minutes, thanks Diego :)

[Pax]

Your radiance shines in your love poem my friend...I love this....

[Pratik]

So utterly romantic! It talks about moments of togetherness where your surroundings gets blur and distant... a neon atmosphere... nothing matters more than the person in front of you... This just transported me to a different world altogether... Your writing is a marvel Emily :)

Thank you so much Aaran, dear. It was the first part, as you see I didn't comment and gave thank you's to everyone, as I am so grateful for who came by, as in that time the function in WC wasn't there... to thank as in fb beneath. Your words, are great my friend, I appreciate them so much! love and light! from the Netherlands, also from my blue mountain :)

[Pratik]

Yeah... i will read the second part shortly.... you are always welcome Emily.. it's a learning experience to read your work :)

So is yours! tomorrow I am all in concentration, and better health to read your astonishing poetry, I will, I will, I'm already addicted lol have a great morning!

[Pratik]

Thank you Emily... always look forward to your views... your poem too made my day :)

Smiling :)))

[Nautili]

"Salty strength" like that phrase for it denotes a flavorful personality, full of confidence and vigor. Lovely video and music to accompany this refreshing love poem. Wonderful.

[joshua deathdealer]

The candy melting together did it for me. This is an awesome love poem!!

[sharonlee]

Elegantly crafted... full of the ebb & flow of the seasons.

[Norma M Sutton]

Beautiful . . .

[Igor G. Balatsky]

Bright summer was moving on and on. And we thought that it would never end. And
we were right, it didn't - the happiest summer together, the saddest summer apart.