~ Squared Thoughts

~ Squared Thoughts

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~ “Dreams are like stars...you may never touch them, but if you follow them they will lead you to your destiny.”

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~ Squared Thoughts

 

 

I'm watching you from my parallel mirrored mind

On the other side of the globe in cubes to find

Sparkling spectrums of light reflections

Rainbow effects make soft my squared thoughts

You are flying around my aura...

As in a light ball bubbled in cosmos so many years

 

I fought the emperors road to find some salvation

Not passed the gates of the locked palace in creation

In the name of the gate misters I shall not pass

Because I had a vision they did catched on their mind readers

It was you on my retina flying around my aura...

As some stars from another time far behind

 

Where Am I? In the gateways of my mirrored mind?

How long do I have to follow the clues of the cubes of that kind?

The oasis of the disillusion reflected some muses I can't reach

Stronger leaded in desire to a magnetic field

You are flying away from my aura...

As a thousand light years separated from me

 

In the one and only dissatisfaction of my dreamscape

I recognize the squared thoughts can maximize my mind tape

The fraction of time into another dimension

Angst in a million separated pieces drifted away from me

My aura filled with nothingness and no matter

Just in another lucid dream I will forever muse

 

 

~ Elisa Laura  

© 2013


Author's Note

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Thank you xx


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So entangled was I by the thin webs glittering between the startling words . . . Your mind is a hall of mirrors, and the cubes representing all else are quite . . . dazzling. The aura is mysterious but reveals so much if you watch and listen. Enjoyed this, I did.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice word trip!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I came by this morning (for me) to pause and reflect a bit. At a glance this coalesced into a snippet of what I "do". Wander the world and listening to the thoughts and musings of others like I. Its like sitting on an old stone wall and staring into ~ infinity and have another voice inside me whispering and whispering so many little things and pieces that ARE important and yet not me. And there is a sundering and a surrounding and a flow or energy in motion and waves of emotion. And I can see all the individual "lines" of force ...and flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great! I love how I could imagine myself in your poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow, when i was reading it i imagined myself in a hot swirling desert with mirrors at every turn... i was looking for myself, not some knight or a prince, but looking for who i am on the inside... thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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a dreamer creates a world and the world creates the dreams..beautiful..my little princess.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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You have a beautifully mysterious mind. I am a dreamer as of late the dreams are becoming more like nightmares, so this star is out of reach for me - This is dreamy too. Very well squared.

Chloe

Posted 12 Years Ago


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YIkes, here goes. Firstly I started thinking about William Blake and 'doors of perception'. The I started thinking about The Doors. Then I started hearing your poem being read by Jimbo Morrison. Then I was totally freaked!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice imagery, I believe the poem is thought provoking, and I like that because it leaves me thinking about my own dreams. Well written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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**takes a deep breath** Eli you leave me awe struck sissy!! your play on words never let me down... BRILLIANT times 100!!!! **tips my lyrical wand to you**

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Hell's teeth. That was like reading filligree. A true tactile delight in the words, and themes and ideas that have left my head spinning. Breathtaking work Lady.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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