~ Squared Thoughts

~ “Dreams are like stars...you may never touch them, but if you follow them they will lead you to your destiny.”

~ Squared Thoughts

 

 

I'm watching you from my parallel mirrored mind

On the other side of the globe in cubes to find

Sparkling spectrums of light reflections

Rainbow effects make soft my squared thoughts

You are flying around my aura...

As in a light ball bubbled in cosmos so many years

 

I fought the emperors road to find some salvation

Not passed the gates of the locked palace in creation

In the name of the gate misters I shall not pass

Because I had a vision they did catched on their mind readers

It was you on my retina flying around my aura...

As some stars from another time far behind

 

Where Am I? In the gateways of my mirrored mind?

How long do I have to follow the clues of the cubes of that kind?

The oasis of the disillusion reflected some muses I can't reach

Stronger leaded in desire to a magnetic field

You are flying away from my aura...

As a thousand light years separated from me

 

In the one and only dissatisfaction of my dreamscape

I recognize the squared thoughts can maximize my mind tape

The fraction of time into another dimension

Angst in a million separated pieces drifted away from me

My aura filled with nothingness and no matter

Just in another lucid dream I will forever muse

 

 

~ Elisa Laura  

Author's Note

Hit it or miss it....

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Extant]

So entangled was I by the thin webs glittering between the startling words . . . Your mind is a hall of mirrors, and the cubes representing all else are quite . . . dazzling. The aura is mysterious but reveals so much if you watch and listen. Enjoyed this, I did.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

you created magical and expressionistic vison of square dreams, it seems so familiar to me as deja vu, as the picture is misty and clear in the same time. I feel enchated by this dream, our thoughts are sometimes a net from squares we are caught inside...
Better to not escape, that is our nice reality!
{nia}
02.04.13

Never to escape.... ;) exactly! let's be our inner childs, and fantastic surreal inner selves forever, the world knows enough hurt, to not dream a little now and then ;) thank you so much love x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think there are many dimensions to thought...and some of the galaxies can be very painful to visit in our minds...yet some can bring redemption of thought and peace of heart.

this poem is psychedelic..creates a fifth dimension in the mind of the reader.

jacob

Hey jacob, thank you for your thoughts, yes, true what you say! :) this was just a fantasy piece of my younger years I think I do love to dream psychedelic now and then ;) thank you a lot. Will be back for you as soon as I can.

[Dream Weaver]

Dreams are a blue print to what we are and what what we strive to be.
There are realistic dreams, broken dreams, impossible dreams, fantastic
dreams and dreams that actually come true. I loved what you did with
this piece, nicely done E.L. xo

Hey Dream Weaver, long time :) great you're back now and then. Thank you for your beautiful words. - Elisa :)

[Dream Weaver]

You're quite welcome E.L. It's always nice to drop in every now and again! :)

[Pax]

'the fraction of time into another dimension'
~ I'm always facinated with dimensions, going into its vortext is a compilations of shapes... like i say before the mind is a powerful thing...its a vast space full of mirrors of ourselves....Great work my friend..

Thanks dear for digging into this older one from me, before we were close friends lovely to see your perspectives :)

[Pax]

your welcome, I love this...

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Where am I in the gate way mirrors of my mind. Loved it! Great work as always E.L.

Thanks dear :) an oldie of the battlefield of my mind.... ;)

[anxia]

'How long do I have to follow the clues of the cubes of that kind?' Lovely.

Your beauty is fearless... Anxia, thank you.

[David]

I don't know if I ever want to end up at an oasis of disillusion,but I know I'm going to be thinking about it a lot for the next while.Your form is cool,it's not restrictive,but it doesn't get lost in itself.Keep up the writing so I can keep reading.:) More & more of your stuff's adding up in my favorites.

[Poeticpiers]

I have read your poems with interest. I do not usually enjoy free form.Your themes are interesting and held me fast start to finish.
Do you ever write formal poetry?

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Elisa...........a fantastic write this is..........loved the journey :)