~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

~ As music notes out of silence, become a living creation

~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

 

 

 

Every sense is a deep inner perception,

Of your deepest emotions, I want to play,

Piano’s burning heat, hits every note

Of your heartbeat that far away

 

As the rhythm shall divinely continue

Let me translate you in music,

And let me make you some Jazz

As you made my day, with all you did confess

 

Let me dance in my mind, and I move the Piano strings

As I feel me better when I play them deep

And the fate in rain, as spring brings hope

Makes you the song where I dance on until I sleep

 

Deep octaves, blissful crying crazy piano notes,

Rambling from upon the high, and down in low

As your poetry does made ballet sparkle

And as your words did made me grow

 

I shall treasure all  of you what lives inside me

I breathe you deeply in every way,

As I shall continue to write for you until the day

We are our own strings of universe playing the notes divinely gray...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thanks :P
xx

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

The spirit in your voice, its purity, spreads warmly through your poetry. The mind begins to hear you play the sweet melodic tunes upon the ivory keys. Such a serene and blissful feeling as the image dances in my mind, revealing your face, eyes closed and smiling as your soothing flow eminates... Peace. Love this sis!

Thank you so much sis, it is an older one reconstructed.. so glad you like it, peace and love honey xx thanks sis

[Empirik]

mmmmmmmm, this one's unique. You broke more rules and did something with a different type of fluid rush. I love this. Compounding! United! It joins two universal languages in to a harmonious mix. I melt, this one kills it! X

[R J Askew]

Strong, positive, and a delight to read because it is so cheerful. The idea of turning poems into piano notes is just great as it shows how the poems have life and inspiration in them. And what better music than music moved by poetry? So the one reinforces the other. You must have been a great mood when you wrote this one!

[Nautili]

very cool write....made me think of a beautiful sonata.