~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

~ As music notes out of silence, become a living creation

~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

 

 

 

Every sense is a deep inner perception,

Of your deepest emotions, I want to play,

Piano’s burning heat, hits every note

Of your heartbeat that far away

 

As the rhythm shall divinely continue

Let me translate you in music,

And let me make you some Jazz

As you made my day, with all you did confess

 

Let me dance in my mind, and I move the Piano strings

As I feel me better when I play them deep

And the fate in rain, as spring brings hope

Makes you the song where I dance on until I sleep

 

Deep octaves, blissful crying crazy piano notes,

Rambling from upon the high, and down in low

As your poetry does made ballet sparkle

And as your words did made me grow

 

I shall treasure all  of you what lives inside me

I breathe you deeply in every way,

As I shall continue to write for you until the day

We are our own strings of universe playing the notes divinely gray...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thanks :P
xx

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

The spirit in your voice, its purity, spreads warmly through your poetry. The mind begins to hear you play the sweet melodic tunes upon the ivory keys. Such a serene and blissful feeling as the image dances in my mind, revealing your face, eyes closed and smiling as your soothing flow eminates... Peace. Love this sis!

Thank you so much sis, it is an older one reconstructed.. so glad you like it, peace and love honey xx thanks sis

[Sleeping Maiden]

whoa, you are extremely a brilliant writer you know! I love your poems. It's such a joy to read them! Their unique and so full of amazing-ness! lol, i had to say it. I love this so much! The imagery is also wonderful. I could picture it.

[Jack Isaac]

Sweet! As your sentiment says "I shall treasure all of you what lives inside me"... I know that all will treasure YOU. They ALL dance on your piano, and you turn these crazy notes into jazz :) :D So true! Sweet! And as I look further into this writing, so many words come to mind... yet all I want to say is sweet. Sweet!

[Michael X]

the depth of a lyrical fantasy, crimson without saying, a creation of such lustful color that reverberates a sensuous pop art enchantment, it's a realm of poetry I can't help but wander, feeling the sense of magic;
soul & muse in each word :)

[Igor G. Balatsky]

That is amazing: I can hear the sounds of music distinctly in marvelous verses of yours...

[David]

Very romantic.It really does speak with two voices,I actually had to read it aloud to hear the musical side myself.Killer stuff.:)

[EmpressPoetess]

Very moving! Your imagery is delightful and emotionally charged!

[Arthur Henn]

Beautiful! - Wonderful Title

[Xanthous Crow]

Quite an interesting take on music. Cheerful, colorful, a delightful read. "Deep octaves, blissful crying crazy piano notes," is an amazing line. What a description!

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You drew me in immediately with the title, of course! I love the way you constructed this. It was very much like each line was a chord being hit. It was filled with passion.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh you are such a true romantic and it radiates through your verse. Such a divine poem.