~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

~ As music notes out of silence, become a living creation

~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

 

 

 

Every sense is a deep inner perception,

Of your deepest emotions, I want to play,

Piano’s burning heat, hits every note

Of your heartbeat that far away

 

As the rhythm shall divinely continue

Let me translate you in music,

And let me make you some Jazz

As you made my day, with all you did confess

 

Let me dance in my mind, and I move the Piano strings

As I feel me better when I play them deep

And the fate in rain, as spring brings hope

Makes you the song where I dance on until I sleep

 

Deep octaves, blissful crying crazy piano notes,

Rambling from upon the high, and down in low

As your poetry does made ballet sparkle

And as your words did made me grow

 

I shall treasure all  of you what lives inside me

I breathe you deeply in every way,

As I shall continue to write for you until the day

We are our own strings of universe playing the notes divinely gray...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thanks :P
xx

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

The spirit in your voice, its purity, spreads warmly through your poetry. The mind begins to hear you play the sweet melodic tunes upon the ivory keys. Such a serene and blissful feeling as the image dances in my mind, revealing your face, eyes closed and smiling as your soothing flow eminates... Peace. Love this sis!

Thank you so much sis, it is an older one reconstructed.. so glad you like it, peace and love honey xx thanks sis

[Pól]

Lucky piano!

[Coyote Poetry]

"Let me dance in my mind, and I move the Piano strings"
Beautiful music and amazing poetry. Music can make us feel part of something with soft and tender movement of sound. Thank you for the journey in to outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[light and ashes]

Oh wow...This is one of your best, gorgeous. This poem is perfection but my favorite part was the last line. "We are our own strings of universe playing the notes divinely gray." Bravo! 100

[MOON]

Music of the mind the soul, lyrics to embrace lovely write.

[Allen Smuckler]

Poetry in motion, Elisa
Makes you want to sing and rejoice for the beauty of love and music.
Your images and use of metaphors allowed this write to flourish and build to a crescendo..."We are our own strings of universe playing the notes divinely gray"...Wow. Now why couldn't I say that?
Great write Elisa
Loved it.
allen

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I am sooooo speechless at the moment! WOW! this was beautiful, I mean deep to the heart beautiful. The music was simply awesome with your brilliant words!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Deep octaves, blissful crying crazy piano notes,
Rambling from upon the high, and down in low
As your poetry does made ballet sparkle
And as your words did made me grow" ~ Wow!! I love this stanza Eli!...
Oh how I miss your poetry~ you feed my soul with your universal wisdom... This is Exquisite work Sis! A well crafted masterpiece of love. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool. Love it much!

[just is]

Oh WOW such Sympathy to write, like the song as well.
You words are magical, i enjoyed this.

[Emerald Seas]

This is beautiful. I love writings that correlate musical notes and scores to feelings and moments with another person, lover. You did a magnificent job with this piece.