~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

~ As music notes out of silence, become a living creation

~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

 

 

 

Every sense is a deep inner perception,

Of your deepest emotions, I want to play,

Piano’s burning heat, hits every note

Of your heartbeat that far away

 

As the rhythm shall divinely continue

Let me translate you in music,

And let me make you some Jazz

As you made my day, with all you did confess

 

Let me dance in my mind, and I move the Piano strings

As I feel me better when I play them deep

And the fate in rain, as spring brings hope

Makes you the song where I dance on until I sleep

 

Deep octaves, blissful crying crazy piano notes,

Rambling from upon the high, and down in low

As your poetry does made ballet sparkle

And as your words did made me grow

 

I shall treasure all  of you what lives inside me

I breathe you deeply in every way,

As I shall continue to write for you until the day

We are our own strings of universe playing the notes divinely gray...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thanks :P
xx

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

The spirit in your voice, its purity, spreads warmly through your poetry. The mind begins to hear you play the sweet melodic tunes upon the ivory keys. Such a serene and blissful feeling as the image dances in my mind, revealing your face, eyes closed and smiling as your soothing flow eminates... Peace. Love this sis!

Thank you so much sis, it is an older one reconstructed.. so glad you like it, peace and love honey xx thanks sis

[Ken Simm.]

A deep jazz poem. Nay a song. Smooth and late night.

Yes, Ken, it is... smooth and deep jazzy like in an old dusty cafe in Amsterdam :) thank you so much for your visions, as always a pleasure to have you by.

[Pax]

i felt your last stanza brings love to your friends and readers... hugs to a heartwarming piece dearest... well done!

Thank you so much, as a hidden musician, I do love to play and gamble with love notes... :) hugs back at you :D

[Pax]

i wish i was too...but music has not rooted its roots in my hands... plain and simple i suck at it...hehe :D... your most welcome!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great concept. Entwining love and music together. This is beautiful and the words are romantic.

Thank you very much... :)

[Poetic Beauty]

you are welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i picture you reading this aloud...in a smokey cafe with the piano music playing in the background, some kind of bluesy rhythm..

terrific mood set by the tone of this piece.

jacob

Thank you j. :)

[Inda]

Love the end and the whole thing is soothing and calming, almost like a lullaby; loved it!

Thank you so much dear Inda, if this was a lullaby to you, I'm happy:) x

[Frieda P]

I'm so jazzed by this, excellent write Eli...lots of heart and soul in this read. Nice!

Thank you luv, yeah some one wrote me his dream, on paper once, I continued his dream.... Thank you so much hun be back soon for your art xxxx

[Frieda P]

I'm even more touched knowing the background, what a wonderful sentiment xo

Xxx :) you may know x

[Frieda P]

Things that make you go hmmmm ;-) xo

That's it.... You know, the untouchable, is that photonic most yearning and romantic.... But we poets know thank you xoxox

[captain]

very nice, lyrical is your words are. simply brilliant!

Thank you dear, Sorry, phone and auto correct... happy you are around x

[captain]

no problem and our welcome.

[Giovannie21]

Its amazing!

Thank you kindly Gio :)