~ Natsuko

~ Freedom is just Chaos, with better lighting...

~ Natsuko

 

 

She walks on a hot sunny summer day,

Thinking in mind of her futures way

 

Thoughts full of passion and extreme desire,

Discovery trips, as she travels the golden paths

 

Vast landscapes full of life, gleaming...

Woods of pleasure, dreams of love

 

A painter in it's pure element

The winter makes her yearn

 

In body and spirit true equality

Literally reunited out of hidden anxiety

 

No sense of time, just being there

A gentle breeze like a warm blanket

 

Unity with nature, and the oxygen of the cosmos

Pure freedom, fading fear slips away,

 

And she feels satisfaction is here to grow

She thinks of running, and never turn around

 

The summer child in her parallel world

Though in her mind it’s still winter

 

Where everything needs to thaw,

As for all the beauty to come will bring warmth.

 

With the patience of time,

And time in all ways of living,

 

Shall be there for her, where she may return

To achieve her inner state of living

 

 

Natsuko is her name

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

She escapes her winter world
A changling by desire
One within all natures eyes
A changling by desire ...

This is gentle .. flowing ... gliding to and fro ..away from realities reach ..
A world serene within a world .. a time full with delicate seasons ...

Wow ... beautiful crafted .. ... Jazz xo

Jazzy luv, you have my heart, you are as much seasonal too, in your writes, so love that connection with you, you always feel what I mean with all.... :) hope you're ok tonight love. :) blowing you strength and well wishes~ always , Eli xxxx

[J. J. Nightingale]

I catch the wishes..sent over waves across mountains high .. to me .. from my love .. beyond her smiling sunrise.. .. Always Love ... Jazz xxx

Aw, I reflect them back, to your world, and native rooted world.... you know how precious decent you have? I merge within... :D p.s. the spanish guitar on your page rules!!! I love that medly. xxx

[J. J. Nightingale]

I am happy it pleases YOU .. :)

It is so connected to my roots.... I loved it instantly! ♥

[J. J. Nightingale]

♥ .. J.

XX ♥ E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are quickly becoming one of my favorites here...I am so glad we're friends, and I look forward to the years ahead!


My best,
Kelly

[Empirik]

I know this character. She is thoughtful, intelligent, mystic, strong, a free bird dancing to be, and connected with the universe like a ninja. A truly deep minded voice you have in this, and the tune is nothing short of that. Beautiful ambient downbeats flowing like, "A painter in its pure element." Said perfectly by you. How she can walk through the seasons is beyond me. I love fantasy. Rhythm, touch, and careful consideration weaves this poem to an end so that she may begin with a-new mind. Natsuko you with decisions a-knew. Loved it! :)

♥

[Empirik]

Awe, Yesss!!! :)

[Cassie Fraga]

taking my mind off to a better place.... holds me breathless as always!! your talent holds no end sis!! **tips my lyrical wand to you** cant wait for another read!! thank you for sharing Eli, you are very much appreciated!!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully said, as always. the words flow so well that it came as a surprise when i got to the end.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the amazing poetry.
"Unity with nature, and the oxygen of the cosmos
Pure freedom, fading fear slips away,"
The poem made me desire a walk away from people and problems. Take a break and be free in thoughts for a moment. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is wanderlust at it's finest! I am mesmerized by the beauty of your words... You have a gift of bringing the reader into a timeless surreal world. Time stops and I just want to be in this whimsical place of serenity.~"A gentle breeze like a warm blanket"~ I love this, Eli.. GORGEOUS write!!

You always feel me best love, thank you so much X

[Tina Kline]

A beautiful poem. I get a sense of peace as I read your words. An extraordinary poem.

[Hotwater]

For me... this is your best, a super write... "a painter in it's pure elements", very much enjoyed... "no sense of time..." yummy! top marks.
*bird*