~ 7 Years

~ Absence sharpens love, presence strengthens it...

~ 7 Years

 

I remember those evenings when I stared out of my window,

Touching with my visions your face in the shimmering moon

Our distance captivated in every single heart beat behind us

Love profoundly around every minute ticking away

Your whispers, so delicious as the most beautiful sound could be

The smile you left me with, every weekend burned on my retina

The emptiness within the five days of you not being around,

So cruel and mean, but the time ticked however through

The trains we had to catch on hot summer days,

And the fate of seeing you waiting for me on the train platform,

Standing there, running at me, to never let me go

People who embraced our love, within their sparkling eyes

As they secretly watched us, and smiled at us on distance

Winters through snow, we left each other, 

And we saw each other again, and again

Staring out of the window, in the busy train, avoiding people

Landscapes, days and the nights, passed easily away

With the thought, I could be any minute with you…

7 years of traveling, patience, love and trust,

We did made it, and look at us now, how close we are

Now if we have to catch a train, it is together

And we cherish the memories while we look again out of the window

And see the timeline of traveling disappearing behind us,

Of a beautiful past and these lovely missed days

We know the twelve years are coming soon for us ,

We smile, out of trust, and we love so strong, as ever

In the trustful reading thoughts we don't speak out loud

We think of all we have made together, and all we will make,

Time will grow in us...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Just part of me...

Reviews

[Corset]

So happy it makes me feel to read these love poems, to know that you have someone to be with you always , someone you have history with, and trust completely, it makes for such a lovely reflection, I'm sure you've had your ups and downs , like all, but it is an inspiration in itself just to read about your love ;)

Thank you dearheart.... for your honest and lovely words.... I will be back for your beautiful art, after my long weekend, X :)

[Corset]

enjoy dear, rest easy, you do not have to worry about reading mine, it is just such a pleasure to read yours.

I do yours as much too read each piece a 10 times, always, (Trying to understand you fully).... !!! :) you're such a brilliant mind dear...

[Corset]

:) hugs

XxXxX to my bestie and Rose on here! :)

[Lover Of Words]

Wow this beautiful

Thank you Kelsey :)

[Lover Of Words]

your welcome

[beautiful dreamer]

how absolutely beautiful Elisa absolutely beautiful. wow

Thank you again, omg you're fast.... I can't keep up lol :D

[beautiful dreamer]

lol its okay i can read a whole page and review in about 10 minutes! i don't expect you to keep up immediatly lol

;) I will come back after dinner dear xxx thanks again

[sithlordjp]

This is so amazing! A ode to the reward that comes with patience... A love that waits is a love that lasts forever... So moving, well done. What a great way to mark the passage of time for your beautiful love story. "Now if we have to catch a train, it is together" Everything is said in that line. Now the train is in this synchronised heartbeat you both share, and it can carry you farther than any rails could... My favorite line is: "And see the timeline of traveling disappearing behind us" Lovely! Thanks for sharing....!

Thank you so much for your beautiful ray of words, :) my friend ;) nice! and I'm happy you enjoyed this one.

[Pax]

hey romantic you :), there is a tranquil aura in this write that makes you feel the love no matter what obstacle are the two in... two souls are better together in the journey of life and love...
"Time will grow in us..." ~ time is just a facade if love is everlasting...

Ah Paxie sweetheart, lovely said, yes, it is a fascade if love is everlasting, brilliant philosopher... :) I can't wait to delve more into your words... so good you are! :) will mail soon too... missing you! x

[Pax]

ops... typo... its facade...lol... hugs and missing you too... hope your doing well and kicking out there..;) and your most welcome...

LOL i did repeat your typo bro lol, it means we didn't noticed both, but listened.... ;) ♫ anyhow... typo's are just typo's I prefere feelings. :D I kicking here out for you too love, wished you and sis were in the car ride tomo! :) hugs! and till soon! :))))

[Androglossia]

Romance at its best! I am not very generous when it comes to reading prose but the simplicity of your title and the choice of words you used here seduced me to reading it. Not to mention the writer itself whom I adore:) Your poem is full of hope and love, the kind of love that will surpass the test of time. Very beautiful this is, my dearest.

Thank you so much for these words... older one constructed, but as true as it is today... :) so happy to have such a great sister, and poetess around for some of my prose ;) love to you dear...

[Androglossia]

I'm so happy for you my dear Eli to have such a wonderful relationship with the man you so love:) Much love♥

And you know, with your Karma, you get rewarded.... I am most humbled by your words, love xxx

[Julia Mancini]

This is such a great romance. :-) You use words very well.

Thank you dear, older piece, we now are almost 13 years happily together.. :) Thanks to all the others too beneath, at that time in Writerscafe, you couldn't thank a person underneath the review... so THANKS ALL! and you sweet Julia x

[emmajoy]

What it is to wait patiently for something, someone, seemingly out of reach but win through and be free to write such beautiful words. This is a dream come true, a happy ever after. It's wonderful!

' Time will grow in us... '

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how lovely you described a love that has stood the test of time and distance..to celebrate a beautiful relationship with someone special..

[Mary Fioratti]

The name of the movie is "Falling in Love"...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WHu-MByifjM&feature=related