~ Listen

...Sometimes the Road, is Liquid...

 

     

         ~ Listen

 

       Listen to all the tender melodies

              Your heart seems to whisper,

          Feel your soul alive

       Breathe out the air, that’s been given

              Let your thoughts swim and dive.

 

       Listen to the waves, the dark sea sings

              Where you are drifting in,

          Feel your heart beats, fast

       Dream life, in pure reality

              For forever, it will not last.

 

                      ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Your poetry so often brings the world of the soul into the world of now. You show us that there need not be a division between our physical world, and our inner spirit. I felt that way again as I read this poem.

In this piece, we celebrate the soul be identifying how it is connected with the body. We feel it's currents connect to our senses, and the way we feel our body moving through the world. I like how you bring those sensations together by mentioning water at the end of this poem.

So nice to read you again after being a way for so long.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are this poet's poet, a true messenger of the heart!
You must tell me how you achieved this formatting...I love it!!

Kelly
x

Thanks love, for the most kind words... I so appreciate them, and YOU. I've send you a mail, :) xx

[Lyan]

It's a great poem to illustrate that we ought to see what we have instead of wishing we had more.To some degree I think it is in our human nature to want more but to another I think life makes us feel that way which is pretty sad.good piece:)

Thank you for your beautiful words Lyan, I very appreciate it. :) Elisa.

[Alfred Kukitz]

You really made the magic pour on to the scene with forever will not last. Lovely piece!

Thank you so very much kind Sir. My review round will be soon, I won't forget.

[Alfred Kukitz]

It's nice that you visit me but if you forget it's okay.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Beautiful!! As always I love your poems They seem to team with love and passion and thats what I lve about your poems Well done Great write

Thank you my dear friend for your time and review. It means much to me. xx

[Tania]

beautiful... I TRULY LOVE THIS !!

Thank you kindly my friend. :))

[Sasha]

Feel your heart beats, fast
Dream life, in pure reality
For forever, it will not last.

Beautiful words ..
So true !

Thank you so much Sasha! :)

[Pax]

aah ~ thanks you for this, big sis... because more often I sometimes neglect to listen to the soulful cries of my weary heart... Our heart/soul is just like the sea and how its sings in beautiful melody is our hope. Often I thing that my soul is asleep or not alive or even I think its dead, with having that thought-- I am truly wrong... its alive, sometimes just there listening or even just there wisphering into the silences of dawn... moving in stillness without us noticing or we are just blinded with too much wrongful/chaotic problems we face... this piece reminds us to just listen, carefully and you'll know... as always big sis, your works marvels me... great!

Thank you for this beautiful review bro. It means the world to me, when you visit. You know how much I treasure all you say. Be back soon for you, I left you a message on Skype. xxx

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Perfect. I love the ending, Elisa! The flow is so beautiful. You are so brilliant! :)

Thank you my dear friend for your kind and encouraging words :) means a lot!

[Ashira Macy]

Magical wording is as refreshing as the water you describe my dear. Too often we find ourselves lost in the chaos of our hectic world and unable to search within ourselves and cleanse our souls with reflection. You are so right, forever does not exist, we must remember to save time for ourselves before it runs out. Beautifully sculpted work of art Elisa.

Thank you Ashira dear, your words are close to my heart. So much truth spoken here... I am grateful with your words... xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yes yes yes, listening is key to growing and learning… especially when it comes to nature, whew has so much to teach us if we would just pay attention.

Thank you so much Dale, it's a pleasure to read your words, made me smile today.