~ Listen

...Sometimes the Road, is Liquid...

 

     

         ~ Listen

 

       Listen to all the tender melodies

              Your heart seems to whisper,

          Feel your soul alive

       Breathe out the air, that’s been given

              Let your thoughts swim and dive.

 

       Listen to the waves, the dark sea sings

              Where you are drifting in,

          Feel your heart beats, fast

       Dream life, in pure reality

              For forever, it will not last.

 

                      ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Your poetry so often brings the world of the soul into the world of now. You show us that there need not be a division between our physical world, and our inner spirit. I felt that way again as I read this poem.

In this piece, we celebrate the soul be identifying how it is connected with the body. We feel it's currents connect to our senses, and the way we feel our body moving through the world. I like how you bring those sensations together by mentioning water at the end of this poem.

So nice to read you again after being a way for so long.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I always enjoy and feel your poems...They are like deep songs, that I like to listen many times, and specially that one! It`s meditation and connection of mind to my inner self, we should stay in peace and try to keep our mind open to the nature, as you do. Feeling is so important before understanding. Many times we just jump here and there in many directions, wanting many things, going to many ways...but the truth is simple, just stay a while, listen your inner voice, and you`ll reach to the essence. Wonderful. :)

:: nour ::

[Ty]

You are great at capturing the feeling of the mind in a meditative state. Everything aligned and beautiful. The words are perfect.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I told you i will come back. And see i am here first.. haah!! Its how i am addicted to your woeds. It isn't forced it has just come out from your pen as smoothly as silk. You write your mind. Thats what a great writer does. I just felt your words embracing me in their watery arms. Drowning me deeper into my psyche.. where i dwell in it..."Dream life,in pure reality"- this was just a killer line. Sets our mind to introspection do the that dreaming of life because life is real. Wow! ! Just wow.. Love you sis. ~xoxo~ you are just Amazing. :)

~Sophy

[SmittyJas]

A lovely look at life as you float in the ocean of love of life and all it has to give. Beautifully said words written very well. Enjoyed your imagination.

[Melissa Frost]

I felt adrift reading this piece. All of my senses were at work. It reminds me of times in my life when I had to focus on myself. When I had to remind myself that I am still alive. That I feel. Darkness eventually leads me to light and it is then that I have found comfort in solitude.

I really enjoyed this. Such ease.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I am torn within these feelings .....clinging and letting go....This is haunting. I have missed you in my absence but of course like this poem. I have returned:)

Thank you kindly my dear friend for your words, I've missed you too, I'm having holiday now, for two weeks, but for you I will come back as soon as I can... ((HUGS))

[Mauricio Montoya]

we got so much going in this world we forget to enjoy the simple things in life. all I can say is
AWESOME

Thank you so much Mauricio... very appreciated. :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Walk on water
Fly over oceans wide
Know rainbows high
Breathe in the moon
Let go the night
Imagine always
Life..

Beautiful with life and heart beats..

Hugs for my Little Dove.. ♥♥

Thank you my precious friend ♥♥ your words are always golden to me dear... xxxx

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome..................♥♥