~ The Journey of her Mind

.... Soft whispers ...

~ The Journey of her Mind

 

 

 

 

Enter her thoughts, with all the

Platonic love, your heart beats

And with all your daily inspiration;

 

Try to reach her soft silken lips

With the kisses of the wind

Tremble, and warmly cup her heart

Within your precious hands

 

Let her breathe, the sky

And observe what is underneath

And breathe with her, passionate

 

Love her like yourself,

Send her nothing but joy

And respect her living soul

 

There where water flows,

Like long rivers, as her blood

And her veins are with magic filled,

 

You may own her, live her...

          And be the journey of her mind.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[Legacy]

Elisa Laura,

Beautiful name for this write and photo to match. Nothing is more intriguing than piercing into the mere thought of peering…

As a man we should take heed to such a write – for there is never enough learning and understand and appreciation to the women in our lives. Beit for our mother, sisters, aunts, grandmas, girl (friends), daughters and most important our soul mate.

~ Legacy, Keep on Writing Life – Jan. 2015

[Johanna]

Beautiful Elisa! I don´t know how you do it.. so amazing

Thank you so much dear Johanna, for your kind words... :)

[David Scott]

You spell it out Eli... This seems like the way to love the totality of a woman, mind, body and soul.
Lovely poetry and again music to match the ethereal inspirations of your musings.

You are missed my friend! thank you so much for your tender and heartfelt words. :)
So good to have you still by ^^ take good care...

[David Scott]

Thank you Eli. I am here and supporting your lovely poetic expressions always. Even if only in spirit. I will give care and receive what returns... :)

As I will you, dear dear friend... will be back as soon as I can, you were really missed, so glad you are back!! :D

[Roger Turgeon]

Amazing thoughts!!! I will try to remember to be the journey of someone's mind...other than my own.

Thank you so much Roger, I appreciate it very much... Elisa :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Immense beauty and clarity this poem brings to me, the reader, as you bear heart and soul here. I am touched deeply by every line, by every tremble, every breath. Your mind is beautiful Elisa.. xx

Your words bring always a ray of sunshine to "Gaia" lol ;) Thank you for the amazing few words, I treasure them my dear friend :) xx

[joshua deathdealer]

lol I was so caught up in this, my tongue was tied, you could say. And rereading I am once again the same. I love it. ^^

Lol, I feel honored my friend... :) thank you so much ^^

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

nice piece. Precious one. love the first stanza

Thank you my friend :)

[Trace]

Yes, yes..... to own a womans heart.
All is good in the world...... with a womans love.

Very nice

Trace

Thank you so so much my friend :) always good to have you by! I try to catch up too...

[Pryde Foltz]

Try to reach her soft silken lips
With the kisses of the wind
Tremble, and warmly cup her heart
Within your precious hands

The heart is fragile and full of all that is worth living for. Beautiful write, Elisa. The music was perfect:)

Thank you big Sis, for the great words... I appreciate you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is how any smart man will be towards the woman he loves… what a beautifully penned piece of advice that I take to heart.

Thank you so much my dear friend for your wonderful words, and time... :) :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are so very welcome sweetie. Was my pleasure. xoxo