~ The Journey of her Mind

.... Soft whispers ...

~ The Journey of her Mind

 

 

 

 

Enter her thoughts, with all the

Platonic love, your heart beats

And with all your daily inspiration;

 

Try to reach her soft silken lips

With the kisses of the wind

Tremble, and warmly cup her heart

Within your precious hands

 

Let her breathe, the sky

And observe what is underneath

And breathe with her, passionate

 

Love her like yourself,

Send her nothing but joy

And respect her living soul

 

There where water flows,

Like long rivers, as her blood

And her veins are with magic filled,

 

You may own her, live her...

          And be the journey of her mind.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[Legacy]

Elisa Laura,

Beautiful name for this write and photo to match. Nothing is more intriguing than piercing into the mere thought of peering…

As a man we should take heed to such a write – for there is never enough learning and understand and appreciation to the women in our lives. Beit for our mother, sisters, aunts, grandmas, girl (friends), daughters and most important our soul mate.

~ Legacy, Keep on Writing Life – Jan. 2015

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Beautiful piece, Elisa! This was very heartfelt for me! The last two lines were my favorite. It is interesting phrasing, which makes it very effective! Thank you for writing such beautiful pieces! :)

[emmajoy]

' Love her like yourself, ~ Send her nothing but joy ~ And respect her living soul '

This from start to finish surely needs be the elixir for and of love, Elisa. Tis more than wise, is beautifully worded, seductive yet strangely pure.

Thank you so much dearest Emma, you always feel my poetry. I am coming soon back for you! miss our talks! -xx- :)

[John Preston]

Well this is very nice piece to read.
Nature it seems encapsulates her being.
Between what exists and what does not exist, space is the love
And so Love is eternal

Thank you so very much for your kind words Sir, very appreciated. Elisa :)

[sharonlee]

How softly wise this is... beautiful flow.

Feed her and watch her grow.

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(¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Peace & Blessings *´¨)

Beautifully said my sweet friend, Much love from Holland ♥♥♥

[Michelle N. H.]

Gaia is very much her own being, and so I do not believe she can be owned, but certainly held. She constitutes our home. She nurtures us like a mother nurtures her children, and so we owe her our deepest care and gratitude. She is alive, conscious like all living things, connected to us.. I adore this feminine outlook, her journey as she flows with the river, and soars in the wind. It is a voyage linked to ours. The love she has is all around, and inside.. Her atmosphere, the life she grows, the beauty she breeds for us all to perceive and feel in our own ways. There is no greater inspiration than nature. It is true beauty, and the wisest of souls within reach.. You captured something of brilliance. xxx

Thank you so much my dear Shell for such a great review, you and me understand... it's so good to read your thoughts here. Can't thank you enough... Indeed, there is no greater inspiration than nature... Thank you so much. xxxx

[Michelle N. H.]

You're welcome, dear Lis. Always. xx

[stars are far]

that was so wonderful .. the feelings here are amazing..i loved it truely.
but i dont think there is a man who can really love a girl, and treat her the way you are asking here.. but hehe thanks for sharing :)

Thank you so much for your valuable thoughts, I appreciate it, my friend, this write was more about the love for "Gaia" the respect I have for nature, as she is seen as female. I breathe her air, I walk her ground, I live in her habitat. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

An enchanting journey! Your words sway with romance and mystery, Eli. Truly charming and a bit seductive too. Wonderful. Lydi**

Thank you so very much dear Lydi!!! I'm on my way to yours too tonight... :D ((HUGS))

[Sophy Freebirds]

The image plus the lines water flows in her veins like blood gave me the idea of nature.. yes she is our daily inspiration- and we should gently kiss her..we need to RESPECT her. Because she is living but as human race we are just exploiting her.Not "loving her like ourself".. . We need to protect her. Yed we own her live in her but we should set on this journey of reading her thoughts.. beautifully written dear.. :) i love nature and i loved this too.

~Sophy"

Ah thank you, you are the first, who sees I wrote this to her perspective, and not as a love poem, in general. You are so right, amiga, thank you for your deep and profound insights, you got it, we need indeed to protect her, withouth her breath, we are dead soon... Thank you so much, for understanding me, and my love I have for Gaia... many hugs ♥

[Sophy Freebirds]

Was splendid to read you dear.. ★hugs★ :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

You have the magic of soul in your breath, eyes and heart. Wonderful piece! Glad your back Elisa!

Thank you kind Sir, for another review, my round will be soon ;)

[SmittyJas]

A tender loving write must be a beautiful mind it comes from yes beautiful.

Thank you kindly for the review :)