~ You Transport Me

... A Love Poem ...

 

~ You Transport Me

 Innocent, and pure

Your love is

You are the dream

In my nights,

The clouds in front

Of my thoughts,

My warm light

All over

 

The episodes

Of time,

For years

The love-locked,

In the chambers

Of my heart

 

The song

Of my morning

The poetry

Of my soul

The silence

On perfect

Moments

The thunder,

And rain

When words

Fail to speak

 

You transport me

To worlds

I’ve never seen

Your voice

Sings songs

Of unheard

Melodies

 

Within the arms,

That are you,

Let me stay,

Be treasured

Kept, and be loved

For who I am

 

Within the hope,

That is us

May we dare

To explore

The road of life,

Before we die?

And after,

May I whisper us

 

“Eternity?"

 

 

 ~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Foxemerald]

As I step upon your words, my feet touch an unbelievable path of love and hope. I feel as though I were moving along the road inside the interior road-map of the heart. This 'heart' which you have portrayed, beats with inspiration and joy. The words are like short bursts of clouds that grace the expanse of Heaven. At once, they unite, shelter, love and treasure. The smooth, shining purity it offers portrays a celebration- one that embraces, and finds joy in the intrinsic self. They remind one of the natural grace which God gives to humanity. They also reminds= us that, in spite of human trial, there is promise of tomorrow. The words that you wrote here are those that are etched into the heart of every human soul. They offer more than artistic talent; they provide us with the gift of unison, an inimitable joy most cannot replicate. Thank you for offering a balm to the spirit, and for letting us read this- your words are indescribably treasured.

Dearest Brooke, what a wonderful review, your words cone from another world if you ask me, ;) they are so rich, and full of compassion, and warmth, that's a thing, I treasure about you dear friend, you are certainly a person who really reads a work, and can give one of the most sincere and heartfelt reviews, you do always, and I can't thank you enough for this one, having you by is pure grace and happiness for every writer... Thank you dear Brooke, much love.

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

Love is truly expressed through words than action. These words melted my heart and made me weak. Yea it is nice poem. Good organisation. And most importantly clear and pure true emotion of love.

Thank you for the kind and heartfelt words Nwanna Onyenka :)

[Sasha]

Unbelievably amazing !!

Loved it !

Thank you so much dear -xx- :)

[Sasha]

you are most welcome:)

[Ashira Macy]

As I experienced your words set to the song you chose to place in the background I found tears welling up in my eyes. You are so gifted my friend, that your words have such stimulating grace to move me in such a way. It is always such a pleasure to read... no... experience your writing.

Your voice
Sings songs
Of unheard
Melodies

This line caught me, touched me deeply. Thank you for this.

Oh, my dear, thank you for such a sweet, and heartfelt review, it touched me today! :) ((HUGS)) I'm always happy to see you! :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is just beautiful. It stirs up deep emotions of love and fidelity. An excellent write.

Thank you so much again, :) makes my night!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

explore that road, before AND after...
that is the real meaning of "us" of "we" of love.

Yes, true! that's exactly what I meant. Thank you so much jacob.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You transport me indeed, Sis...sigh...

Your art always sets the bar for other poetry...
You write on such an elegant level, nothing compares to the world you build with the flick of your pen.
I love the way this piece flows, softly, uninterrupted... it leaves me at awe how much emotion comes from your heart.

In this piece, I felt as if I were reading vows to someone special...
I truly enjoyed reading this, Sis... Dreamy write!~xoxo~:)

What a beautiful words, Sis, you humble me, I so love it, you love this little scribble... you know, exactly for who I wrote it... ;) and you felt that right... lol (((HUGS))) so good to have you by! -xx-

[Horizon K.]

Completely romantic, dear sis... To be treasured and loved for who we are-- exactly, and to be transported to another world that you create together, all the while knowing-- this, you had been waiting for.... a truest kind of love... eternity, are the words we want to shout, when this kind of love is found...

Thank you so much Sis, for this... good to see you by love, and also thanks for the photo comment! you are the best -xx- :) and you always get me, and my words. ♥

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh....Eli, this is blissfully romantic and speaks to a forever love....a love that endures through all adversity. So very beautiful! Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you so very much, Lydi, yes you are right... a forever love. Many thanks, truly.. knuffels :)

[Kayleigh]

~ The episodes
Of time,
For years
The love-locked,
In the chambers
Of my heart ~

Oh my Elisa, this was truly romantic and so utterly breathtaking. You took my breath away with this one and I am completely in awe at the beauty of this poem. Truly stupendous.

Thank you so much sweet Kayleigh, for this nice review, dear woman. :) made my eve!

[Michelle N. H.]

And I am in tears, Elisa.. These words of yours touch me deeply.. I love the simplicity, the arrangement by short sentences or single words standing unaccompanied, the breaks, sudden, immediate, quick, like heartbeats, and thus with a natural soothing flow - the one of true love, that simply is, observing and feeling, loving in silence, serene, untainted, dreaming.. Whether hearts come to beat side by side or not, it goes on, the love felt. It is never wrong, in itself.. only beautiful. xx

Shelly dear, Aw, don't be in tears hihi so cute you are. -xx- thank you for this intense and great review, Heartsmiles... You know for who I wrote it ^^ and yes... Love is something elusive, never ever try to grab it, for it shall fly or run, treasure it, like the wind of time... And it will embrace you... ((( hugs to you)))

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Lizzy.. Those are words to remember. ^^

Welcome dear, always, and thank you for your wonderful review... -xx- it means the world to me.