~ You Transport Me

... A Love Poem ...

 

~ You Transport Me

 Innocent, and pure

Your love is

You are the dream

In my nights,

The clouds in front

Of my thoughts,

My warm light

All over

 

The episodes

Of time,

For years

The love-locked,

In the chambers

Of my heart

 

The song

Of my morning

The poetry

Of my soul

The silence

On perfect

Moments

The thunder,

And rain

When words

Fail to speak

 

You transport me

To worlds

I’ve never seen

Your voice

Sings songs

Of unheard

Melodies

 

Within the arms,

That are you,

Let me stay,

Be treasured

Kept, and be loved

For who I am

 

Within the hope,

That is us

May we dare

To explore

The road of life,

Before we die?

And after,

May I whisper us

 

“Eternity?"

 

 

 ~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Foxemerald]

As I step upon your words, my feet touch an unbelievable path of love and hope. I feel as though I were moving along the road inside the interior road-map of the heart. This 'heart' which you have portrayed, beats with inspiration and joy. The words are like short bursts of clouds that grace the expanse of Heaven. At once, they unite, shelter, love and treasure. The smooth, shining purity it offers portrays a celebration- one that embraces, and finds joy in the intrinsic self. They remind one of the natural grace which God gives to humanity. They also reminds= us that, in spite of human trial, there is promise of tomorrow. The words that you wrote here are those that are etched into the heart of every human soul. They offer more than artistic talent; they provide us with the gift of unison, an inimitable joy most cannot replicate. Thank you for offering a balm to the spirit, and for letting us read this- your words are indescribably treasured.

Dearest Brooke, what a wonderful review, your words cone from another world if you ask me, ;) they are so rich, and full of compassion, and warmth, that's a thing, I treasure about you dear friend, you are certainly a person who really reads a work, and can give one of the most sincere and heartfelt reviews, you do always, and I can't thank you enough for this one, having you by is pure grace and happiness for every writer... Thank you dear Brooke, much love.

[symmetryAsymmetry]

Wow!

Can't seem to make myself stop reading...all your poems that i read are out of this world! Can't get enough..

[Chris]

THAT, was very, very dear... may we all find that Love within...

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Beautiful and so gentle, deep with the color of pale blue..with picture in clouds. It`s a very harmonious writing, going to way of innocence and light, asking many forgotten questions about "eternity" and distance between things...I love the beginning, and this pure love and transporting to another universe make our world free and higher. Just you use so exact words!

:: nour ::

[Cryingkate]

This brought the tears....And brought my heart to slowly beat...

Hugs...........Friend..Hugs...........

[Pryde Foltz]

Within the hope,
That is us
May we dare
To explore
The road of life,
Before we die?
And after,
May I whisper us

“Eternity?"

Really splendid write. L'il sis.

[raj24]

its beautiful... pure feelings of love and togetherness and desire to be in each others arms for ever...its wonderful.. thanks for sharing Elisa :)

Raj

Thank you so much Raj for your beautiful words. So very appreciated. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

The true love of the souls is a beautiful thing to treasure.. the way you created a realm of lovers i want to escape to this place of love clouds.. :) you words are delicate giving the poem a delicious coating perfection.My world is really mundane but you turned it into a magical colour of hope.Thanks for sharing this Elisa.★xx★... it is a beautiful dream from which i don't wanna come out..

~Sophy

Thank you so much Sophy for your wonderful review, I'm so glad I could reach that with you dear dear friend, I will be back for you and others as soon as I can -xx- thank you.

[Sophy Freebirds]

:) you are welcome muchly dear amiga...

Thank you dear amiga :D makes me smile, my review round will be soon... xx and hugs!

[Anita Singh]

"Let me stay,
Be treasured
Kept, and be loved
For who I am"
My favorite lines.
This is superb!!!! I loved it! You have penned it so beautifully. Perfection! :)

Thank you again my sweet friend, for your time, I really appreciate all. X

[Alfred Kukitz]

WOW! In the most eternal way of transcending skin, thought and desire you have placed your words near the Gods.

Thank you once again Alfred for the very kind review, and thoughts. :) Elisa.