~ The Three Gates

It seems--that; "Love conquers all"

~ The Three Gates

 

 

He traveled along the three gates of hope,

His mind was strong, his unconscious reached

It wasn't day or night, there was only space

When he made his decision and entered

 

For him she was different, just one of a kind,

The lost hope he'd must rather find

Her long brown hair, her deep intense look,

The pages, of her body language,

He could read like a book

 

She was an Ingénue, of beauty

Mysterious, her so sensitive heart,

She could celebrate the rain,

In her beautiful mood swings

Out of love, out of pain...

 

As her mind could sing the words

Like a thousand synapses felt;

She'd reached the right chords

And truthful, so strong down the hill

Her name was spelled

 

For her "love", felt just that deep,

It has to be cherished, honest, and

Like the thorns of a red Rose

This time she was gone, far away;

To another realm out of reach

 

But not lost in his dream, of truth

When he'd choose the right gate of hope,

She sang soft songs, for him to find

And no evil could poison her light;

Where love, in the gate of hope, did collide

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy, this dream of Romance -xx-

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Pages in a book written of a love longing to be found pass through the gates its never to late for love to strike the heart and awaken the souls of two meant to be. Very romantic poem Loved it while reading it May i have many dreams of romance regarding this works.

[I. Wright]

"The pages, of her body language, He could read like a book". I'm absolutely dripping with writer's envy at that line. So exquisite. And a delicate piece overall. On a metaphorical note, it reminded me that even though there are many avenues in which to anchor my hopes, career, relationships, etc., I cannot lose - Hope is its own victory. Thank you for this, Ms. Laura.

I really dig your words my friend, they are sublime. They reach, and feel, they know. :) I'm smiling from ear to ear, by reading them, thank you for your insight, on this one. It's very keen. :)

[willweb]

If love were in to find itself in another realm, I know it would be lost without your beautiful poetry Elisa. This one charmed me and healed me inside. It held my heart in its grasp and gently touched me. I really loved this one today.

Dear Will, thank you immensely for your words. You truly do me honor, I'm grateful with your presence and time today my friend. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Dreamy and magical romance in every line. We sometimes make the seemingly wrong choice in love, don't we...and others can not understand why we make the choices we do. We make them because we have hope and perhaps we see things in the other person no one else can or will. If the love is strong, it works. Such a lovely fantasy, Eli. Knuffels, Lydi**

You really got my dream Lydi, thank you again very much... this was a write, I dreamt about two people, who love so intense, but it seems there are boundaries, it's a crusade for them to find eachother. And yes, you are right, In this dream, "he" made the right decision, and she, opened her heart, anew for him... Thank you dearest for the words, everytime, you bring me joy with your great insights Lydi!! Knuffels!! -xxx-

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You always paint a riveting love story within your poetic art, Sis...

This makes me root for the love that continues to grow, regardless of the obstacles.

An infusion of fantasy, love, hope, dreams and entangled emotions... as if the war of hearts are within.

Fabulous write, Sis...felt this to the core!~xoxo~:)

Sis, thank you for being here, and your wonderful heart, and words! -xx- :) Your words always mean much to me, you know that! :) Thank you *.* -xxxxx- ♥

[Blake Fodor]

A fine poem, I enjoyed your chosen words and theme.

Thank you very much my friend :)

[joshua deathdealer]

This is such a beauty to behold and to savor. I could find find myself here although I'm sure it applies to many. Hope can be found here and loves grace. I will allow the soft songs to wash over me. I will let the rain shower my soul. Xx

Thank you buddy for the great words, always a pleasure to read your thoughts :)

[Edward Lancheister]

excellent penned, drown me into the depth of your delicate dream. please the sight through beautiful words

thanks sister for share this exquisite poem :)

Thank you Brother for the kind review, it's really appreciated. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

WOW!! This isn't a poem. It's a total experience. Excellent work Elisa

Thank you so much Baby :)

[Pryde Foltz]

What a splendid tale. I am reminded of snow white. Very well written and conceived:)

Thank you Pryde :)