~ The Three Gates

It seems--that; "Love conquers all"

~ The Three Gates

 

 

He traveled along the three gates of hope,

His mind was strong, his unconscious reached

It wasn't day or night, there was only space

When he made his decision and entered

 

For him she was different, just one of a kind,

The lost hope he'd must rather find

Her long brown hair, her deep intense look,

The pages, of her body language,

He could read like a book

 

She was an Ingénue, of beauty

Mysterious, her so sensitive heart,

She could celebrate the rain,

In her beautiful mood swings

Out of love, out of pain...

 

As her mind could sing the words

Like a thousand synapses felt;

She'd reached the right chords

And truthful, so strong down the hill

Her name was spelled

 

For her "love", felt just that deep,

It has to be cherished, honest, and

Like the thorns of a red Rose

This time she was gone, far away;

To another realm out of reach

 

But not lost in his dream, of truth

When he'd choose the right gate of hope,

She sang soft songs, for him to find

And no evil could poison her light;

Where love, in the gate of hope, did collide

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy, this dream of Romance -xx-

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Pages in a book written of a love longing to be found pass through the gates its never to late for love to strike the heart and awaken the souls of two meant to be. Very romantic poem Loved it while reading it May i have many dreams of romance regarding this works.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

From the beginning till the end, so enchanting poem-story...The gates of hope are something everyone needs to enter, and make decision. Once he enters there is no way back. And he will always search for his perfect love! Your poem speaks the message of gentleness, care and love..and the end sound so strong!

When he'd choose the right gate of hope,
She sang soft songs, for him to find
And no evil could poison her light;
Where love, in the gate of hope, did collide

:: nour ::

[Frieda P]

An enthralling fantasy of love's power. It's mesmerizing first word to last.

The pages, of her body language,
He could read like a book

Ahh if only it could be true, enchanting read Elisa.

Thank you so so much dear Frieda, for your kind words, and be here, I need to catch up on yours badly, and I will hon!! -xx- :)

[Frieda P]

This was sublimely captivating, it was my pleasure Eli :) xo

Thank you so so much!! again :) xoxo

[Vidya Bacchus]

This poem held me enthralled till the very last line.Absolute perfection it had a fantasy feel to it wrapping me up inside its beauty.You are so very talented Elisa :)

I'm very thankful to you Vidya-dear. :) Such a kind review... ((HUGS)) I'm pleased it wrapped you up inside. -xx-

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome my sweet it was an absolute pleasure :)

I'm every so happy to see you by! always! thanks again sweet friend... -xx-

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome .I must visit more but I am trying to catch up since I'm not here as much.

Take your time love, I know how hard it is, we try our best, there are simply too much giftend and lovely writers, we can only do one at a time :) and with me, just know it, you never have to rush, my poetry will stay here for as long as I'm on the globle lol... ;) -xx-

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...you are a true darling Elisa and poetry as beautiful as yours will always be remembered :)

Aww, as yours too!! ^^ you give me always the humor I need!!! ((HUGS))

[Vidya Bacchus]

((Hugs)) You are the sweetest sweet Mwah :)

Thank you again dear, it means much to me! ((HUGS)) sweet woman!

[Vidya Bacchus]

.....................:)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The only bad thing about this poem is that it ended.
But that end was marvelous. Thank you for such a wonderful
dream.

That means much my friend, thank you ... :)

[Tania]

beautiful. i love love this

Thank you :)

[realmwriter]

A rather romantic piece I must say. We often forget, that there is always hope, Even when it seems to have gone, It is there. Hope never fades, never dies. You remind us of that in this piece. Your romance lifts us off the page and transports us into that place of hope. Just incredable

Thank you so much, this one, is about two close people in real life, I admire, and I admire their "love". Life is about the right choices, and therein is hope, there is always hope. yes, well said. I'm always glad you totally get my writing. :)

[realmwriter]

Iam happy to understand your works. As well, I a happy you understand mine. You're most welcome Elisa.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she's his song of love....he searches for a lost chord, but finds it with her...really like the "body language/ book" analogy...so cool...

so romantic.

Thank you very much for the kind words jacob! :)

[Cassie]

Elisa, this is absolutely sweet. No words can describe how sweet this is..

Thank you so very much Cassie :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

This was amazing, Lis'. This 'story' is one I feel, and surely think of, though this need not be today. I foresee, I feel, and think, and all sorts of other means--a more sound way.

Perfectly said... and I know. :) when you can merge these three gifts, the right time will come. Thank you for your amazing review.