~ Close

~ Where thoughts and dreams made music.

~ Close

 

 

Close -- you are, within the million different sounds your voice just "is"

Where I could hear the music of silence, and our thoughts of equality

The attractive sound lingers, to slowly build on each tone note to get

Thinking, perceiving, to be the perfect stairways of tranquil melody

Reaching to be music, to be one with me, in harmony, intensely -- close

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy, thank you for reading -xx-

Reviews

[I. Wright]

I could see this fitting well in a dictionary after the word "soulmate". But the photo you chose to place along with it made me think harder. The woman is alone which had me wondering if it was a closeness with herself - an inward, spiritual thing. Either way I viewed it was beautiful which speaks to the strength of the poem. Thank you.

Thank you so much for this stunning review. You have the ability to enter the realm of empathy. I so appreciate it. Your words are close to the meaning here, (of this dream I had)...

[Aethereal]

Yes, a voice may bring bliss as much as a kiss. I was inspire to write this tiny gift poem for you:

Sonic Cohesion

Seeking harmony,
I found your voice,
sonic melody
on waves of choice.
Serendipity
made us rejoice.

Ah on point, so beautiful my friend, thank you for this little musical gift of yours. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ahhhhh Elisa your tender words take my breath away and the hopeless romantic in me sighs in delight.

Thank you very much my dear friend :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So much my pleasure :)

[Edward Lancheister]

one step to get close will capture a moment in your life , two step will brought me to see a journey that you have taken, three step closer i could watch the movie of your life

well penned Sister salam hangat dari Indonesia

Thank you Nyong, for your time, and read, and words.... Selamat malam dari Belanda to you :)

[Edward Lancheister]

selalu menjadi pagi yang cerah saat membaca puisi Nona Elisa ( always become a brightly morning come everytime read Nona Elisa Poem)