~ Echoes

~ To love is to know distance, to love is to set one free...

~ Echoes

 

 

  The dusk of thoughts, felt aloof

          Where once a spectrum of light

From your presence held home,

             In the darker shimmer, minute by

Minute where the sun settled down, and the trees swayed

                        I silently kept my faith,

                     I loved my sky of

       Emerald hue, where clouds in little light passed by;

  And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom

                   Whooshing against the quay -

          Your voice, echoed a thousand times

                  Where a hundred times you’d  say;

       You’re winged my love, follow me and you

             Will see, where I just hide at day.

 

 

       ~ Elisa Laura                                                 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading/reviewing/rating -x- Enjoy!

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This speaks in volumes to me...Love echoing across distances was felt instantly while reading this.

I adore how almost every line line is broken. Bringing the love back around, over and over it seems..(I really like this style of formatting.)

The faith being silently kept. ^^ The beautiful night imagery crossing skies and oceans..Then the ending with the truth. Hehe (You are winged dear and so is your poetry.)

Finally the challenge. Follow on. xo

Wow, thank you for this stunning review, I can tell you, you did really feel it and understand it. (no exception, you always do ^^) lol haha... who said it was about me? hah! ;) lol I love your words, thank you dear :) :) xoxo

[Rene Salinas]

I seem to always get stuck with poetry which demands a fair amount of thinking activity and every so often I end up coming around to your place and having read a few of your writings I always get undone by how your writings have imbued themselves by atmosphere. And we are let to know that thoughts of a higher nature have descended and although you are describing aspects of a relationship again it is surrounded as if held by nature. And then we are let to know hat this being is of invting nature he is also willing to show you his hiding place.

Oh if I only had wings I would be after him

Thankyou

Thank you immensely Rene, for your wise and beautiful comment. You really get me and my poetry... I can't thank "you" enough! :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your poetry has always had an ethereal quality to it...but this one truly shines!


Kelly
xx

Thank you so much Kelly xoxoxo :)

[Daydreamer]

Stunningly beautiful!
Rate:-99/100
Sorry for lack of details in my review, but I love the poem intensely and in entirety♥
Stay blessed xx

Thank you very much Missy! :) always appreciate your words, and the time you spend to read me.
Elisa xo

[Daydreamer]

you're most welcome, of course xx
that was a pleasure :)

Thank you once again! my friend. xoxo

[Matching Socks]

This feels like magic, you've created such wonderful images.
Nice work. :)

Thank you kindly Anče, for the words and time, nice to see you by! :)

[Matching Socks]

It was my pleasure. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Enchanting poetry, sweet Eli! The romance is strong and yet there is a melancholy thread running through your well written lines. " And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom" That line is one I will not soon forget. Amazing poetry! Lydi**

Thank you dear Lydi! I'm so glad I could take you with me on this journey. I'm so glad you like that line... ((knuffels)) :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

If I could imprint this review with my physical and emotional reaction, I would. Though words are short to describe it; you do well in your world--converging with the rest of all things.

I know brother, if you were here, or I there, I would know what you'd do. :) thanks for just being always around and here.

[V. P. Trujillo]

Well, you are what kept me around here--you and this incessant feeling, that seems to have now manifested into two, that keep me here.

And you know that true things, and the best things in life just go in three don't you? :) that makes me smile... And the same counts for me, I rather would have left, this place long ago, if there wasn't this true and special bond... :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Indeed. Three is imprinted on me since birth. Perhaps even before.

Yes, I know it is imprinted with you... and oh somehow to me too, however I have two's in my birthday numbers, In numerology, I'm a three. :) interesting isn't it?

[V. P. Trujillo]

Yes. It is.

[Luissanto]

The only word that comes to my head and my heart is beautiful.
Your words truly touch ones soul as they flow so fluently.
You are truly a gifted writer. Thank You for sharing

Thank you Luissanto, for the kind words towards this piece of of me, I truly appreciate it. Elisa

[Troy Henson]

Ever so magical is this piece from you my dear. The formatting of this worked well as the love spoken of travelled so effortlessly along each line and was a dream to read.

Regards
Troy

Thank you dear one, for the beautiful words, as always, I'll be back after this weekend for your stunning writings... :) Eli

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Elisa... I loved your sky of
Emerald hue, where clouds in little
light passed by... gorgeous imagery!!
Echoes of his voice took my breath away.
I found your poem hauntingly beautiful.
truly... Pat

Thank you so much with whole my heart sweet Pat, for your lovely words, I'm thankful, -xx-