~ Echoes

~ To love is to know distance, to love is to set one free...

~ Echoes

 

 

  The dusk of thoughts, felt aloof

          Where once a spectrum of light

From your presence held home,

             In the darker shimmer, minute by

Minute where the sun settled down, and the trees swayed

                        I silently kept my faith,

                     I loved my sky of

       Emerald hue, where clouds in little light passed by;

  And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom

                   Whooshing against the quay -

          Your voice, echoed a thousand times

                  Where a hundred times you’d  say;

       You’re winged my love, follow me and you

             Will see, where I just hide at day.

 

 

       ~ Elisa Laura                                                 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading/reviewing/rating -x- Enjoy!

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This speaks in volumes to me...Love echoing across distances was felt instantly while reading this.

I adore how almost every line line is broken. Bringing the love back around, over and over it seems..(I really like this style of formatting.)

The faith being silently kept. ^^ The beautiful night imagery crossing skies and oceans..Then the ending with the truth. Hehe (You are winged dear and so is your poetry.)

Finally the challenge. Follow on. xo

Wow, thank you for this stunning review, I can tell you, you did really feel it and understand it. (no exception, you always do ^^) lol haha... who said it was about me? hah! ;) lol I love your words, thank you dear :) :) xoxo

[Roger Turgeon]

Distance...truly known when measuring love...the less the better...distance ....known again when love ends...the more the better

Thank you kindly Roger for your time and thoughts, very appreciated. Elisa :)

[SmittyJas]

It has mystical tones to the poem very special I like the title "Echoes" a lovely sound in the valley, The Verse-Your Voice Echoed a thousand times-Where a hundred times you'd say-You"re winged my love, follow me and you.

Thank you kind sir, for another beautiful review. It's very appreciated. Goodnight from Europe.

[Cassie]

Elisa, do not get surprised if i delve in deeper, I love reading you

Awe, thank you so much sweet woman... :)

[Ashira Macy]

I love how you pair each of your pieces with music that illustrates it. Are these the songs you are listening to as you compose your pieces, or are they found later on?

I loved my sky of
Emerald hue, where clouds in little light passed by;
And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom
Whooshing against the quay -

These lines were so full of description and silky smooth to read. Gorgeous.

Thank you once again for a beautiful review, it depends, I'm a dream-poet, I do work out 60-70% of my dreams, in poetry, and mostly I know the exact piece of music already with it, for I listen to music 24/7, but it can also be, I choose music after a piece, or inspiration comes, whilst I'm writing, it's really different.. :) Thank you dear for the kind words truly appreciated by me. :)

[Ashira Macy]

A dream poet, that sounds fascinating. I never remember my dreams, so it is wonderful to be able to see into someone else's. It is my pleasure, your art is unique and exquisite.

Thank you so much for these words, really that means very much to me. Oh I would love it for you you will one day, (personally it gives me the inspiration to write). So is yours, I'm already hooked to all you write. :)

[Ashira Macy]

You are too sweet, thank you! =D I really hope one day I do. In the mean time I will have to rely on the world around me to inspire.

[Horizon K.]

...You’re winged my love, follow me and you
Will see, where I just hide at day...


This is lovely... It makes me think of how we paint our loved ones across our skies, draw pictures in our minds where they are every universal metaphor... Then, when we miss them, we can see them in the emerald sky, the settling sun, the singing sea, the passing clouds...
An ethereal piece, my dear, of seeing the one we love, in everything...
I enjoyed this so much.

Thank you so much Sis, for your wonderful words... You understood it so well, there is indeed love in everything, well said... ((HUGS))

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

this is the same as a quote I've heard. If you love them let them go if they were meant to be yours they will come back but yes if you love it enough you set it free.



Lovely piece here thank you for this and
your kind review and comment you left on my page.

Blessings. Kindred poet

Thank you so much dear Benita, always a pleasure to read your thoughts. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

it's a pleasure my friend. you're quite welcome. blessings. Kindred Poet

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wow Masterpeice of work that will always Echo the heart of the readers! Its really aloof and special...

Thank you so much, for enjoying my musings, and glad the echoes reached you friend. :) -x-

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It reached and will always echo whenever I will read my favourite list of poems!

Thank you so much friend, it means much to me. ;)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You deserve much to be friend, welcome and keep pouring beautiful poems like this! :))

I appreciate you. Likewise friend. Thank you, I will try he he ^^ they come when they come...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes absolutely right they come more close to heart and pour more heavily, when the dark rainy cloud comes....just imagination and nothing more! You will definitely keep going and sharing more
..

So so true, I never force my poetry, and I think that's the key, and then it's really meant, you write likewise, I've noticed. Thank you for being you.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks for being a true friend! Welcome you always :))

You too!! the feeling is mutual, and I will come visit more often! :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks friend!

[Ruth]

Such ethereal elegance! A strong voice you have love, and always so sparkling. I find your poetry a refreshing quench...this is so very stunning xx

Thank you so much lovie, I do appreciate it very much coming from you! ♥ I'm really happy you enjoyed! -xxx-

[Kayleigh]

Elisa, thank you for showing me support as soon as I joined the cafe, I am touched. Dale has been trying to get me on here for a while now and I finally gave in to him. Hey, it shut him up, haha.

This is truly a beautiful poem and it so speaks volumes to me. It is a poem that I can definitely relate to in more ways than one. Your graphic is gorgeous as is your poem. Well done, beautiful.

Haha, you are welcome dear Kayleigh, always, and good he did, for you deserve to be heard. :)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, actually it was a dream, I worked out... thank you for your encouraging words dear. Pleasure to meet you. -x- Elisa

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮Wonderful word choices, and this flows so nicely. Beautiful work!╰☆╮

Thank you so much Brittany for your nice words :) -x-