~ What Remains

~ What Remains, "If" Travel Thoughts, Scribbles from the Car, Love, Life, Elisa Laura

~ What Remains

If you can dream - and open the gate to beauty;

If you can love - and follow the music to your heart;

If you can touch -  the untouchable thoughts by thinking

What remains, inside of you, is smart.

 

If you can walk - through the deepest pain and hate;

If you can be - without being too much;

If you are proud - of the truth that you’ve been spoken;

What remains, is your strength to embrace and touch.

 

What remains - is most important deep inside of you;

What remains - can make all dreams come true;

What remains - is your living compass to inside trust

If you can dream, with love from flesh to dust.

                      ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy -xx- :)

Reviews

[Thea]

Aw, Elisa. I missed checking out your poems. This was beautiful. I love the message of this poem. Very soothing. Kept me glued at the moment. I was suddenly reminded about certain things that I should have worked on in the past. I learned something from this though. It was such a great work from you. Pretty nostalgic. Keep writing. ^^

Thank you so much dear, for your time and beautiful words, I'm really happy you enjoyed my little scribble, and I'll be back for you in a bit, I've missed reading you too ^^ -x-

[Thea]

You're welcome. And it's ok. No need to rush. Take care your time. ^^

[Thea]

Ohmygahd. I mean *take your time hahahahahahaha

Hahaha.... I got you lol, I'm on my phone, so this happens to me all the time haha... ^^ thank you, I'm back home soon xx

[willweb]

Exquisitely beautiful and so very upliting was this poem. What a wonderful way to see things Elisa. There is so muh truth and happiness in your words. I really enjoyed this today.

Thank you so much dear Will. A pleasure it is to me, you enjoyed this one today ^^

[Persona]

A very clear, straight forward message. I love the photo and the title. It has a good, even rhythm.

Thank you kindly for your time and review. :) appreciated !

[Persona]

You're welcome. I enjoyed the background music yet it freaks me out because I have no idea where it's coming from!

;) good it did... that's all I love to evoke with my readers. A bit of magick....

[joshua deathdealer]

I am reminded of how far I have came...and what remains. Thank you.

Thank you dear for the lovely words, I'm on my way to yours in abit.. :)))

A bit.... I mean, I'm on my phone.... Oops hah...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW Elisa a very deeply insightful and profound poem… a poem to feed the mind soul and spirit. Brilliant work my friend.

Awe, thank you much my sweet friend. Always happy to see you. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome hon, always nice to read you. xo

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Keep it forever its that kind of work! Glad to read this great work

Thank you dearly Skyfall for your insightful words... :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend and you deserve it!

Thank you dear, can't wait to read you and with all focus :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I am just a blank page nothing to read but here after reading your poem I feel that I am still alive!

Oh no, I've read already some of yours ;) and they are beautiful... ;) I'm a silent reader lol...so I will come back. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Anything that's beautiful must be appreciated, I like you're poem so I appreciated....

Thank you once again Skyfall :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is very nice, it has a peaceful and gentle flow with the words. I also love the picture you picked for it. I was also wondering if you have a song attached to this o.o I can't see where it's at though if so lol so weird anyway I really enjoyed it lol

Good Job

Thank you so much my friend... :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome ^^

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem really touched me. As I read along, it was like I was taking a journey into the inner depths of my soul. It was like you were guiding me through some sort of reflection and meditation. This was a nice experience.

Thank you my dear friend, that means so much to me, I think that's what traveling does with me... many thanks! -x-