~ Silverstar

... Love is eternal ...

~ Silverstar     For you I could fly softly in A thousand light years of hope, Across the stars to seek you   Over the moon, and touch her face; By the sun, and feel his burden;   Permanently away from home, Forever in doubt, I choose to fly, Among a million little lights Of your beloved brothers and sisters   … But I’m seeking for you. For the brightest of all, the one And only " and I know deep in my heart, For my love of light Dreams, just simply fight …   “And time, is timeless” my Silverstar     ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy this one -xx-

Reviews

[S.F]

Elisa, I must say I find this poem most mesmerizing. I find myself lost in its silent music, wandering in a world of both darkness and light. I enjoyed every minute of it; the never-ending journey to the loved one, to the brightest furthest star. One so hopeless, yet still so full of hope. Great job.

Thank you so much Salma for your kind words, I'm so pleased you like it, I saw we have much in common, and that you have post great fantasy stuff too... I will come by soon for you. I loved your words. So appreciated. -x-

[jacob erin-cilberto]

definitely enjoyed this one, my friend...this sends the reader to the moon and back.

jacob

Thank you so kindly Jacob. I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[KeeD]

Hello Elisa, yet again you've transported me to a place of magic. To seek a star, is to be in love with a memory so precious that it radiates through the test of time. Your writing is so beautiful, and when you search for your silverstar what makes it even more beautiful is you know you're in love with a ghost, something so precious in the past that it still holds all the importance and respect of the days for futures to come.

Thank you so much for this stunning review dear Kee. You understood more than you even know. I'm grateful with your time, and words here dear friend. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

The song to me touched on the mystery and never-ending feel of this journey you speak of. When the music slows down I imagine you've came close to this entity and then almost without warning it speeds up and the journey continues. For the content of the poem this song was to me a perfect choice.

The celestial imagery and metaphors are breathtaking, then entwined with the subtle and heart stopping romance this poem becomes breath giving. So much that I was unable to breathe while reading then towards the end, gasping in the air with the eye opening end.

Possa la luce più brillante guiderà a casa. La mia casa sarà qui tra le tue pagine.

Thank you Josh!!! really, you read me well, from musician to musician, here... you can read, my notes, and pauses. My high's and lows, Plus you understand where home is... and that death isn't scary. :) Beautiful review, as always lol your words, reach beyond, e, si... speriamo che sarebbe così quando andiamo... ;) sono securo, che c'è un posto per noi, vicino la stella in argento... che belle parole mi dici... sono felice che c'eri qui amico mio xxx

[joshua deathdealer]

Fin dall'inizio e fino alla .... oh attendere non c'è fine. xx Non ci sarà fine a questo. Questo è eterno. Tale è l'amore.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow I get to be the first to review this wonderful poem… it so speaks to me of how we are never alone in this universe. A really inspiring little poem Elisa.

Thank you dearly for being in my kind of musing of late... the cosmos, and the universe and all in and beyond, thank you dear friend, I so appreciate it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome… but reading your work is my pleasure.