~ Soon

Soon, we leave, yes, soon my dear...

 

~ Soon

 

 

We are blinded by all the violence,

Our sense of longing begs for a warmer place,

Where we will grow and will expand

In galore - with trust and love

For the darkness in here - soon we leave behind us.

 

When our sun rises, and the mist is gone;

I will take your hand, and we shall be free.

We will run over snow covered mountains,

With not much we shall survive,

For we have all we need

 

“Soon, my dear

            Soon”.

 

 

        ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy -x-

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

The romantic longing and hope for the future together in this poem has an innocent, nearly youthful, feel to it. To leave behind the turmoil and the negative thinking of those who might not approve and just run off into the sunset...where love will be all you need. Such a lovely thought! I liked the free feeling of this one. Lydi**

Thank you my friend, for your great words... I'm happy with little... thank you for all! -x-

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i find this not just love between two people but love of humanity, a longing to get away from violence...this world is so violent right now...

we really need some years of peace....wonder if that will ever happen..

this poem gives me a sense of hope.

jacob

Thank you jacob, you've got me well, on what I tried to convey here. :)

[kublakhan27]

I've missed you in the time I've been away, and I've missed your poetry which never fails to be majestic and sensitive...this piece truly spoke to me, it says much about the duality of the human, and our penchant for very good things and very bad things...the final stanza left me uplifted and optimistic, which are not emotions that come naturally to me...lovely work as always dear sis :) xo

Thank you so much my brother, I've missed you too, and still do.... still on holiday... I'm so glad this spoke to you. xoxo :) can't wait to catch up!

[Deuces]

I enjoy this, as it's almost a "Bonnie and Clyde" vibe. That the drama and complications need to be left behind and we can just rely on one another. That is true peace. Adding to favorites, as I can relate to this very much so.

Thank you so much my friend... indeed, that could be! ;) Let's leave it behind yeah... and it's true peace exactly! when left so. -x- thank you G.

[joshua deathdealer]

This read to me like a beautiful story. One that will unfold soon. I am enthralled. Period.

Thank you my super bestie!! -x- :) You know it will happen ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is all you need, especially in a world filled with hate… a love;y little piece of writing, you work is always inspiring.

Thank you so very much my friend.... indeed, love is all "we" all need...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome ;)

[Half Dream]

"When our sun rises, and the mist is gone;
I will take your hand, and we shall be free.
We will run over snow covered mountains,
With not much we shall survive,
For we have all we need"

I really wanted to read something like this today. You're a very gifted poet dearest sis. Sigh.. I always read and read your words over and over again that's how beautiful your words makes me feel. It's like listening to a song that I never get bored of it. Your words speaks wisdom and they has a very deep affects to your readers. I love you my dearest sis. I never get tired from learning from you. :)

Maya that this write touched you so deep, is a true honor to me, dear one. Thank you for your beautiful words. -x- :) much love.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

At the beginning of the poem I interpreted that is about persons that live in a crowded city and they want to go to the suburbs to spend quality time away from the clutter that might be distracting their happiness.

Thank you Raven Sis... :) always happy to see you by!

[Pryde Foltz]

We are blinded by all the violence,
Our sense of longing begs for a warmer place,
Where we will grow and will expand

From you gifted pen to Gods ears, Elisa. Wonderful write.

I hear too it's your birthday. Rock it:)

Thank you so much dear Pryde... also for the Rock wishes... I did!!! ;) -x- till soon, after my holidays :)

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

I love the feeling this gives me. This is a beautiful poem.

Thank you so much Jessica :) I'm glad it could...