~ Soon

Soon, we leave, yes, soon my dear...

 

~ Soon

 

 

We are blinded by all the violence,

Our sense of longing begs for a warmer place,

Where we will grow and will expand

In galore - with trust and love

For the darkness in here - soon we leave behind us.

 

When our sun rises, and the mist is gone;

I will take your hand, and we shall be free.

We will run over snow covered mountains,

With not much we shall survive,

For we have all we need

 

“Soon, my dear

            Soon”.

 

 

        ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy -x-

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

The romantic longing and hope for the future together in this poem has an innocent, nearly youthful, feel to it. To leave behind the turmoil and the negative thinking of those who might not approve and just run off into the sunset...where love will be all you need. Such a lovely thought! I liked the free feeling of this one. Lydi**

Thank you my friend, for your great words... I'm happy with little... thank you for all! -x-

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Soon has created a soothing effect wonderfully framed....

Thank you so much :) :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[willweb]

This poem was so romantic and so soothing as I read this today. Such a feeling of love and affection found me here in your poetry. I really enjoyed this today.

Thank you so much Will :) I appreciate you!

[David Scott]

Reminds me of "Game of Thrones" a little ...
Dreaming of a better life, a better tomorrow is one of the deepest codes within the human soul.
I hope all your dreams of a better day come true.
I love the music you find for your work btw... Great picture and song to add to the feeling of your poetry.

Thank you for your wonderful comment my friend :)

[Awakened Rose]

"Soon my dear, soon"
Ahhh I just love your poetry :) so many divine messages come through your words..beautiful imagery!!

Aww thank you so much!! and I love yours, I'm glad you have found me! :) :)

[Aethereal]

There’s always a niche that’s free from the itch of violence. I was inspire to write this tiny gift song-poem for you!

Violence

Fierce violence on the Sun
when felt from far away
keeps us warm and chipper
from Holland to Cape May.

Thank you so much for this well meant little song-poem in return, my friend. I will keep this in my thoughts forever. :)

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! You must remember that we're all the children of a violent super-nova explosion that took place eons ago thus forming all of the elements of which we are composed. We've all been forged within a white hot atomic furnace just like a horseshoe, or an Excalibur sword.

Yes, very on point, I know, and shall remember, for it's a part of us. :) thank you once again...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Elisa --- this just rolls off the page...
the detail is quite there...
from start to finish...
like how you leave us withe the last line...
seems to echo to infinity...

Thank you so much dear Glen. Always great to have you over :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Tempeste Mavys]

This poem has such beautiful feeling, I felt like winter just from reading it.

Thank you very much Chelsey for your kind words. Elisa

[Brittany Zedalis]

Gave me the sense of a beautiful love letter. I really enjoyed reading this. ^-^

Thank you with whole my heart Brittany! I'm glad you enjoyed this one!! xx :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Awesome .. I love this poem, your words are very beautiful and magnificently expressed. Wow .. it`s a wonderful write! ;)

Thank you so much Wordsmith! I'm glad you liked this one :D

[Wórdsmíth]

Your welcome my friend, Elisa! Yes, I enjoyed this write and i`d read your more stuffs to enjoy .. you got a talent ;)

Aww, thank you very much once again my friend. :) I shall come by for you soon too :)

[Wórdsmíth]

You`re far kind .. yeah.. you`re always welcomed to my profile. May be, to you .. my stuffs won`t be as beautiful as yours but I always try to give my best and would love to see you on my pages too my friend ... Thanks for the grateful words, Elisa ;)