~ Serenity

~ Serenity, Elisa Laura, Meditation, Awareness, Love, Relationship, Time alone, Happiness, Freedom, Joy, Little things, Feeling, Sensing.

~ Serenity

 

And when I saw, there was no tide,

But tranquility of my lake,

I realized, there is no need,

 

  For nothing there is need -

 

All I have, is all in me,

The silence tells enough,

But you are there;

 

And so am I,

Thus quietly we speak...

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

With special thanks to Mi Mi, Enjoy -x-

Reviews

[Joshua W. Harris]

This piece is wonderful, Elisa. It is small, it is simple, but it is poignant and it speaks so heavily to the heart. I love it. I can sit there and be there by that lake whilst I read this piece, and I truly appreciate the talent it takes in order to do that. =]

Less is so often more, thank you Joshua, once again, your words mean always so much to me. :)

[Dream Weaver]

Gentle as a warm summers breeze, a delicate texture short and sweet.. ;)

Thank you so much my friend, for your great words, I tried to keep this one, pure to my core, and as simple as I could, with raw honesty. :) thanks for your time, always a pleasure when you come by.

[Dream Weaver]

Sometimes my dear friend less is more...

[Dream Weaver]

P.S. nice touch with the music as well...

It so is.... mostly it is.... and I like that. :) that's why we take long breaks, to gain new inspiration, and feel the music inside.

Thank you thank you... dear friend. :)

[Dream Weaver]

Agreed! :) x

[Aethereal]

Your poem shows me that you’ re aware of your connection with still water. I was inspired to write this gift poem for you which you may keep as your own.

Crystal Identity

Tranquil waters must reflects an undistorted sky.
Silent waters have no need to bring about a lie.
Crystal waters best reflect a silent crystal eye.
All they have is deep within, and it’s their strongest tie.

As water is my sign, a little tear of it just reached my cheek.... thank you my friend. That was beautiful... (I'm speachless) and that not happens often...

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! Good night, sweet dreams!

A wonderful rest to you, friend... the day for me has begon already he he... I shall keep your wise words with me. :) take care.

[Eric Pudalov]

Wow, a poem about inner peace!! (At least, that's how I interpret it.) This is so amazing, Ellie, it's as if you're speaking directly to me with this one.

"All I have, is all in me/The silence tells enough." I would love to share this poem with my dad - I think he would truly appreciate it, too. Thank you so, so much for writing this and sharing it with the WC community! Perhaps it is this inner peace we are all searching for (whether or not we realize it).

Wow, such a beautiful review... you rock at what you bring, and say, my friend. And of course, you may share it to your sweet dad. :) I would be honored too, and humble the same time...
You are welcome, I just know, for all there is a solution, and if we listen, it's in our core...... ((HUGS)) and talk soon buddy -x-

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Can you bottle this? I shall sip it daily until it rids my ailing. YOU ARE MAGICAL! HUGS!

I will send a special bottle over seas.... so your shore, will find it...... love, thank you sweetheart... (((HUGS)))

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Inner peace, that is what we need to achieve to find the ultimate happiness… a brilliant little poem.

Thank you so much for feeling this piece. Yes, Inner peace.... :)

[Renée]

Serenity…sigh…a very sweet piece E L ! just swirls of that special relationship, that needs no words..

Thank you so much sweet Renée, indeed... for me and him... no words are needed, much love to you :) -x-

[Renée]

that is the sweetest… love to you also ( :

Thank you dear... really.... *.*